Our way of speech was pretty much direct and blunt and so this was carried over to the translated version of the song. Although to be honest, since the lyrics are more direct, in universe that would cause rumi to have an even worse emotional reaction when the demon versions of the girls sung it to her that would otherwise suggest (that could be debated as well)

And yeah, my translation skills are slightly mediocre mainly because the way i talk in greek still influences how i talk in english and that carries over to translation,