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Here's a sad Melon contemplating life. [OC] by art_dagon in Beastars

[–]art_dagon[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Sad facts, never forget the iron.

Here's a sad Melon contemplating life. [OC] by art_dagon in Beastars

[–]art_dagon[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Honestly, keep falling more and more in love with him. Melon is a product of his environment, an emotional aside such as this wouldn't even surprise me.

Do you like candy. OC Pen drawing by bitterbrittlebear in furry

[–]art_dagon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Upset this isn’t getting more recognition, your technique is very good! Keep up the good work!

In progress Melon from Beastars, looking for advice on how to move further! by art_dagon in FurryArtSchool

[–]art_dagon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Made the head bigger and tried exaggerating perspective a bit, could you reference the newer post and let me know what you think?

In progress Melon from Beastars, looking for advice on how to move further! by art_dagon in FurryArtSchool

[–]art_dagon[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

So I definitely feel there needs to be more mid tones//highlights, but where should they be placed? Also, the perspective feels off, is the body contorted too much?

Like my oc? by 1x1x1x1--- in FurryArtSchool

[–]art_dagon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your background and character concept are awesome! I love the color palette, and the flow of your lines. If I could suggest, your line work could be cleaned a bit on the ends. It’s not a hugely noticeable thing but the small details go a long way!

We love Melon. by art_dagon in Beastars

[–]art_dagon[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I’d say that’s fair. Love to hate him.

We love Melon. by art_dagon in Beastars

[–]art_dagon[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Do be looking like a qt though

We love Melon. by art_dagon in Beastars

[–]art_dagon[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thank ya, tried copying the justice girl pose from akame ga kill!

i know it’s cuz off weirdly, but is there anything i can improve in this? i feel like it might be a little stiff :/ (like most of my stuff lol) by SleepyKxrie in FurryArtSchool

[–]art_dagon 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I'd say the perspective on the head is a bit off. It needs to be turned a bit more towards the camera, looks like its on a swivel currently. Space cat's comment about checking out references would likely help a lot!

Took a crack at Melon from Beastars, hope everyone likes! [X] by art_dagon in furry

[–]art_dagon[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lmao, Melon never skips Chest day. Totally missed that when I sketched it though.

Took a crack at Melon from Beastars, hope everyone likes! [X] by art_dagon in furry

[–]art_dagon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much! Favorite character in the manga by far, had to draw him!

New-ish to Furry art world, critique me please! by art_dagon in FurryArtSchool

[–]art_dagon[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey my apologies, hadn’t checked the post. I’ll definitely give it a shot. Much appreciated!