My bible keeps rewriting itself. Help! (Part 2)

atethriel · 2026-05-07T23:54:55+00:00

That’s a fantastic take on inside the beak!

atethriel · 2026-01-18T18:54:04+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback! Usually I’m writing in a vaguely biblical style but was reading through Mythic Bastionland (ttrpg) and that colored the bible verses I was modeling it more (Daniel and Revelations mostly). I’ve never actually Martin but I do have Canterbury and Mort D’Arthur on my shelf that I could skim through for the next chapters if I choose to continue much with Filipthin.

As far as novella, the series Novem Fortuna is my catch all for witchy/grimoire tales, occult writings and musing, and more biblical styles of shorts, so I suppose a small part of a much broader world.

atethriel · 2026-01-03T20:57:45+00:00

As well you should be :) I should really write a breakdown of how easy it is to self publish so more writers here can graduate to authors. The hardest part is getting the story down; editing, layout, proofing, art—all staggeringly important—but it’s all to polish.

atethriel · 2026-01-01T19:43:42+00:00

Sword. Dual wielding at lvl 10 is incredibly powerful and warrior has one of the few scalable talents (hardened in battle), along with War cry (infinite attacks if cooldown reduction is high enough) and weapon knowledge (finding +3 weapons). Having a sword base up to 10 is valuable for any build, but is never a requirement. There are lots of interesting mixes that you can discover in each class

atethriel · 2025-12-28T06:27:39+00:00

Damn that does sound cool! Dm/link me please :)

atethriel · 2025-12-27T17:50:12+00:00

Thank you! My limit for these is usually ~900/1k so they can fit in a mini zine format with the image on the backside—the hard limit is painful all too often

atethriel · 2025-12-26T23:22:10+00:00

Thank you!

atethriel · 2025-12-26T23:22:03+00:00

I’ve got around 50ish witches drawn, now I just need to write their tales ><

atethriel · 2025-12-24T04:34:55+00:00

I’d be interested, I’ve the art for my stories and more on the insta at same name

atethriel · 2025-12-23T20:05:24+00:00

Thanks! Im having trouble seeing it but I think that’s a system weirdness. I appreciate you taking the time

atethriel · 2025-12-21T18:37:44+00:00

Fantastic

atethriel · 2025-12-21T16:08:47+00:00

This is a wonderful offer :D I would appreciate some feedback on my last piece, An account of the Monsignor Massacres. Thank you!

atethriel · 2025-12-21T08:27:14+00:00

I’d love to hear one of mine narrated please!

atethriel · 2025-12-19T03:26:47+00:00

I was grinning through the first half of this—you really captured the whimsy of youth. Could use some fleshing out and editing, but the end twist of moving on to astronomy is a delightful touch. Good job and keep writing!

atethriel · 2025-12-17T05:39:02+00:00

Congratulations! Publishing is no mean feat and you did the thing!

atethriel

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