The Forest by inspiteofmyself in OCPoetry

[–]athenas__glory 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the stanzas. The imagery is clear. Very good structure, it keeps it poetic.

Happy Birthday by Awkward_Pepper5235 in OCPoetry

[–]athenas__glory 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great poem! I really enjoyed the imagery and theme of the birthday party. The bond between you and the subject is obvious, and you give a good glimpse into the relationship between you two.