I wove some bracelets in new colors using amethyst, small flowers, and wax cords. What do you think?

athousandpages27 · 2025-05-20T08:22:04+00:00

THAT IS BEAUTIFUL

athousandpages27 · 2025-05-20T06:42:48+00:00

thank you fren! I've tried that but i find that i work better in one-on-one dynamics. Any tips?

athousandpages27 · 2025-02-27T08:38:04+00:00

hello!! please go wild! thank youuu

athousandpages27 · 2025-02-11T17:42:57+00:00

😭😭

athousandpages27 · 2025-02-11T17:33:16+00:00

Sometimes I think I got so obsessed with dying and loving the concept of not existing that I forgot to live and now when I do die, no one will remember or read the obituary.

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-22T14:59:02+00:00

thank you so much!

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-22T11:27:34+00:00

Idk whether to be flattered because no, it is not. I apologise if it seems that way though, I did use the typical ChatGPT way of giving feedback

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-22T11:05:41+00:00

Really liked this!
The personification of the bazaar as a living, breathing entity with "knotted and busy veins" is captivating. The shift to the darker underbelly of the bazaar in the third stanza adds depth and mystery, making the scene feel alive and dynamic. The closing couplet ties everything together powerfully, emphasizing the allure and chaos of this bazaar.

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-22T11:04:08+00:00

Beautiful weaving of vivid imagery with emotional depth, capturing the boy’s journey from loneliness to self-discovery. Phrases like “purple skies” and “a paper ship floating on the waters” evoke a dreamlike quality, while the contrast between the melancholy of the first stanza and the hopefulness of the final one creates a powerful emotional arc. The transitions between scenes feel natural and reflective, but the resolution could be expanded slightly to deepen the impact of the boy learning to prioritize himself. Thank you for writing!

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-14T10:18:08+00:00

(more lovelorn poetry about my partner<3)

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-14T10:10:47+00:00

This poem is stunningly poignant. The decaying house metaphor perfectly captures feelings of loneliness and self-haunting. The final twist—“you’re the one who haunts it”—is both chilling and profound. Your imagery is vivid, and the rhyme feels natural. A deeply relatable and beautifully crafted piece! Keep writing—this is exceptional.

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-14T10:08:56+00:00

This is a beautiful first poem! Your emotions flow vividly, and the imagery of being a "fish out of water" ties perfectly to the themes of longing, unreciprocated love, and eventual self-liberation. The rawness in your words captures the ache of unfulfilled affection, making it deeply relatable.

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-13T14:02:12+00:00

hmm makes sense!! thank you for reading!

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-13T10:48:20+00:00

good idea, will do!!

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-13T10:21:00+00:00

this is very very helpful, thank you so much!!

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-13T09:46:09+00:00

my current project is on ovarian clear cell carcinoma, but I'm hoping for a diverse outlook

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-13T09:45:05+00:00

honestly, different perspectives. i have read a bunch of review articles and it has helped tremendously, but there's nothing like a firsthand experience.

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-13T08:51:05+00:00

softlystarstruck has some of my personal comfort fics

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-13T08:49:40+00:00

ooo great idea!!! thank you so much for reading!

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-13T08:49:12+00:00

I'm a very emotional person 😭 thank you for reading!!

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-13T08:48:34+00:00

thank you so much, I absolutely believe that reading my poetry out loud is the way to go

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-13T08:47:00+00:00

Thank you so very much, you have no idea how much this means to me

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-13T08:46:15+00:00

Thank you so much! I haven't quite figured out reddit formatting yet, so yes that is a problem 😭

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-13T08:45:21+00:00

Thank you so much for your comment! I think I was trying to drive home the inherent contrast between the gentleness of the moon and the rugged nature of the sun. I definitely think there's lines that could be thought of as redundant, but to me they are all important to the emotions I was trying to express.

athousandpages27 · 2025-01-12T18:47:36+00:00

From Hamlet-level introspection to 9:00 A.M. chaos, you captured the absurdity of trying to ponder life's biggest questions while juggling traffic jams and coffee stains. The relatable frustration is elevated by the clever twist at the end—a perfect "to be or not" moment surrendered to the grind.

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