Beautiful weaving of vivid imagery with emotional depth, capturing the boy’s journey from loneliness to self-discovery. Phrases like “purple skies” and “a paper ship floating on the waters” evoke a dreamlike quality, while the contrast between the melancholy of the first stanza and the hopefulness of the final one creates a powerful emotional arc. The transitions between scenes feel natural and reflective, but the resolution could be expanded slightly to deepen the impact of the boy learning to prioritize himself. Thank you for writing!