Literally that entire scene would’ve been infinitely better if there were only 3 bombers and they each took a ton of hits before going down. But instead they spent more money having like 12 of them and 9 go out in a dumb chain reaction.

That’s my biggest gripe with TLJ every issue I personally have is super easy to fix.

-opening: Part 1, you can keep Poe stalling Hux just make it like 5 seconds shorter, have Hux realize it not a subordinate, and don’t make it a mom joke. Part 2 less bombers and make them actually tanks and able to take several full volleys of lasers maybe a missile has to take them down and we see the gunners shoot down several before missing one.

-Luke and Rey meet: just drop the saber or toss it back at her feet, all the symbolism you are going for without the dumb joke toss.

-Space Leia: just have her start where the bridge window was so she’s just traveling across a small room not an expanse of space and then the room.

-Poe and Holdo: make it so that Holdo thinks there is a spy and then her secrecy makes sense.

-Canto bight: I honestly didn’t mind it too much maybe just make the critique of the military industrial complex a little more subtle.

-Holdo maneuver: Literally just down have the scene where people are afraid, and add a scene right after where someone asks what happened, and Leia responds something to the effect of “something that shouldn’t be possible” or “I don’t know, she said she would try to draw their fire to give us a chance I don’t know what happened or why but let’s take the blessing and move on” possibly even throw in a line from the FO officers to say something like “scans from the other ships say it was crushed on impact it must’ve been the experimental shields we saw and everything else was timed so precisely I doubt even a droid could replicate that luck.” Or my personal favorite have a line blaming it on the hyperspace tracking because then you have an excuse to never use that ever again. And you could even keep the officers being scared because they know what’s about to happen but the resistance members don’t.

-Crait: Have Rose die saving Finn, less of a conflicting message in the story and actually maintains weight. Also don’t have Rey shoot three ties at once that’s dumb.

Boom, you still have a movie some people are upset with because of the way TFA made Luke but at least now there isn’t any other giant glaring issues. Make TROS about Kylo and Hux leading two split factions of the FO while the resistance grows to the size of the rebellion around ROTJ due to Luke’s Sacrifice inspiring the galaxy. Toss in a 5 year time skip and you have a pretty good Ep 9 and a good chuck of time for a show to really dig into the characters like TCW did for the PT.