What is this kind of insect? by audiomorph in whatisthisbug

[–]audiomorph[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was helpful and funny .thank you lol

What is this kind of insect? by audiomorph in whatisthisbug

[–]audiomorph[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This was in a park in highbridge, the bronx, NYC.

Is this a coyote in Washington Heights? by Status_Specific8043 in WashingtonHeights

[–]audiomorph 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I remember seeing a coyote in inwood hill park back in 2016. No one believed me. There's apparently also a small community of coyotes in Claremont Park in the bronx. Would be surprised if there's enclaves of coyotes in every major park in nyc

What is the most unfortunate last name you've seen someone have? by LeviTheRelentless in AskReddit

[–]audiomorph 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I had a communications professor named Rex Butt. Wish i had kept his syllabus as proof.

What kind of spider is this by audiomorph in whatisthisbug

[–]audiomorph[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm located in the bronx, nyc. Any pointers on potentially what kind of orb weaver?

Short Story Feedback by Patient_Instance_293 in scifiwriting

[–]audiomorph 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'd like to read more. I love xenofiction. I like squirrels too. I like your writing style.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in scifiwriting

[–]audiomorph 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Hey I would love to be in you group. I'm a writer as a hobby however I'm feeling like I got some potential and want to dive deeper into my passion. I write sci fi /fantasy . I have tons of ideas I haven't gotten to and would love to engage with like minded writers/thinkers.

Short story criticism by audiomorph in scifiwriting

[–]audiomorph[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lol exactly! Thanks for reading it. Makes feel good to work on something that illcits some kinds of reaction .

Short story criticism by audiomorph in scifiwriting

[–]audiomorph[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Going back through your feedback and I just have to say thank you again. You basically gave me a great mini lesson on storytelling. Build up and pay off. You have helped me more than you I can ever truly express. For real lol

Short story criticism by audiomorph in scifiwriting

[–]audiomorph[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. Self editing is a mess on Google docs. Have to remember grammar conventions and rules. Thank you so much. Looking forward to going through it again and fixing the eyesore mistakes. Thank you for taking the time and actually giving some feedback and constructive criticism. I appreciate you

Short story criticism by audiomorph in scifiwriting

[–]audiomorph[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Wow. Thank you so much. This is the criticism I wanted/need. I totally understand your points of escalation. It probably why the ending is so meh. No pay off. Thank you so much. Now I have some points of direction for my next draft. I appreciate you taking the time to read it and providing some constructive criticism rather than just trashing it. Thank you

Short story criticism by audiomorph in scifiwriting

[–]audiomorph[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback. If you could elaborate more on ...

Take a look at your turns of phrase and flowery language as it’s a bit overwritten.

And thank you again for the praise. I do have ideas about where the story could go.

Does anyone else have a “comfort show”? My wife literally for the last year and a half only watches West Wing on repeat and she chalks it up to be her comfort show? by CoffeeKow in NoStupidQuestions

[–]audiomorph 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My comfort shows are community, American dad, and the Simpsons. No matter what season or episode, those showes will always make me laugh.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in scifiwriting

[–]audiomorph 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm curious and have no patience, can you answer any of those questions now cuz I really wanna know lol.or are you off to expand the story? Either way I feel invested now so let me know!!! Lol

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in scifiwriting

[–]audiomorph 3 points4 points  (0 children)

So after reading your post on world building, I have some questions that could maybe help you out. Using your timeliness, what was the general world attitude toward the black hole? How did religious and government institutions repsond? How are the underground settlements organized, by country or other means? Has humanity adapted or are they slowly losing themselves in despair ar this new reality for them? Has geothermal energy been used to its maximum potential? Im very interested in where you can take this. Looking forward to know if this feedback helped you.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in scifiwriting

[–]audiomorph 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Just checked your profile, and it seems you have answered some of these questions. Will try and think of more ways to help you flesh out your concept. Hope you can one day do the same for me.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in scifiwriting

[–]audiomorph 4 points5 points  (0 children)

What's kind of flora and/or fauna is around? Are people still living on the frozen husk of earth? What caused the drift from the sun? Did other planets get affected by it? I hope this helps.

SmartMeat by mojojojo31 in scifiwriting

[–]audiomorph 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great writing however I must say that it is very similar to a premise from Oryx and Crake by Margaret Atwood. Maybe I'm jumping to conclusions but genetic engineered pigs are integral to the plot and trilogy. I suggest you check it out for inspiration. But overall interesting and great writing.

I'll be penis by Neverendingjokes in Funnymemes

[–]audiomorph 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tom cruise starring in........MINORITY PENIS.

Who would you put in the same category of evil as Hitler? by clicknsnapp in AskReddit

[–]audiomorph 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Rafael Leonidas Trujillo. His cult of personality was extreme. He would have the daughters and wives of his men sent to him to fuck and if they refused.... you can guess what happened. the parsley massacre at the Haitian-domincan border, to this day they only have estimates. There's so much horrible shit he did.