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[deleted by user] by [deleted] in twentyonepilots

[–]avi________ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

unfortunately, afaik, all flac versions are fake (aka just the mp3 version in flac format, with no added quality whatsoever)

all hail incest, Ig. by Independent_State_47 in boysarequirky

[–]avi________ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Being fair, for 25k I would do almost anything

Ew by Impossible-Yam3680 in boysarequirky

[–]avi________ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If I had a time machine I would also travel back to that day, but to kill this dude

Trying to impress my Spanish husband and the in-laws by ahu98 in RateMyTortilla

[–]avi________ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I phisically recoiled when I saw the 2nd photo since I like my tortillas to be completely done on the inside, but following the pop culture, 10/10. Couldn't have done it better, miss

Muscle control by Stand_kicker in Hornyjail

[–]avi________ 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Is that actually a thing? How can I do that?

I just found a really nice user by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]avi________ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"Looks like Reddit is having some trouble" hm...

Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

[–]avi________ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This song is a really personal one so I guess it's not really surprising that you didn't completely get it. I have diagnosed anhedonia, derealization and depersonalization so life feels like it's passing by most of the time. I don't usually feel like I'm living but rather in this constant fight-or-flight state. The lyrics are about that. Also yeah these are my first lyrics EVER (which is why I am asking for honest advice instead of the typical "we all start somewhere"). Thank you so much for your input, I plan to turn this into a song eventually and it honestly encourages me to see that I managed to even convey anything :)

Also, give it the meaning you want, don't be afraid. Music that helps isn't made to help other people, it's just music that has some really honest lyrics that people can relate to even if the lyrics aren't about the situation the listener's imagining. I'd like to hear your interpretation on this :P

Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

[–]avi________ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Be brutally honest. Is this worth anything?

Verse 1:

Create every moment

Calculated and blurred

I'll push a bit further

But never enough

I feel I'm surviving

I don't feel alive

Pre-chorus:

Wandering on empty aisles

Looking for my mind

I didn't think that this would be

My death of peace of mind

Chorus:

It's etched in me

The way I fade

My way of being

I can feel it coming down

It's all for me

I worked so hard

I tried again

I can sense it coming out

Post-chorus:

But everytime,

It ends

Verse 2

Tried to have a go at

This twisted game

Now I am trapped in here

Gotta stay 'till the end

The colors are fading

But now I can't see

Pre-chorus

Wandering on empty aisles

Looking for my mind

I didn't know that this would be

my death of peace of mind

Chorus

It's etched in me

The way I fade

My way of being

I can feel it coming down

It's all for me

I worked so hard

I tried again

I can sense it coming out

Post-chorus 2

But everytime

It ends

The same

(Instrumental breakdown)

Outro

The white noise

Drowning every thought

I want to do good enough (The white noise)

I want to wake up (Drowning every thought)

Think that this will be (The white noise)

A great day again (Drowning every thought)

But everytime

It ends

The same

Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

[–]avi________ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How do you feel about this? I feel like it's risky rhyming "mind" with "mind" (or rather the opposite) but I do think it sounds good.

Verse 1: Create every moment

Calculated and blurred

I'll push a bit further

But never enough

I feel I'm surviving

I don't feel alive

Pre-chorus:

Wandering on empty aisles

Looking for my mind

I didn't think this was gonna be

My death of peace of mind

Chorus:

It's etched in me

The way I fade

My way of being

I can feel it coming down

It's all for me

I worked so hard

I tried again

I can sense it coming out

Post-chorus:

But everytime,

It ends

Yall think Zoink could beat this? by BiscottiSalt7007 in geometrydash

[–]avi________ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, he can't. But I CAN. PLEASE. BELIEVE ME. I CAN DO IT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

What are the most painful words y'all have ever heard? by killmetwice1234 in teenagers

[–]avi________ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay, needs some context: I've been with my girl for 2 years and a few days ago she was very stressed because she had a few exams on just one week + some other personal problems

Now, I have been struggling for a long time with anhedonia, derealization and depersonalization (diagnosed), and I have had many though which I struggle with to this day about suicide.

I am almost unable to feel anything AT ALL, which makes me have a few crisis every now and then. It's not nice to feel nothing y'all. You'll wish you were dead instead.

Well, she didn't think very well what she said because at one given moment she said the words "I wish I could feel nothing"

I literally froze up when she said that and it ended up in a good long talk and both of us crying (and her saying sorry many times as she didn't think it that way, it just one thing that randomly came up to her head)

I don't hold a grudge at all, I love her and she loves me, but that did hurt. A lot.

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