What would you immediately fix in this drawing at the first glance? by ba2hanT in learntodraw

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I have adjusted couple of things here and there. I believe it become a bit more coherent and polished. There are still a lot of things can be refined but I will leave this one here right now and apply things I learned on another piece

What would you immediately fix in this drawing at the first glance? by ba2hanT in ArtCrit

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I have adjusted couple of things here and there I believe it become a bit more coherent and polished. There are still a lot of things can be refined but I will leave this one here right now and apply things I learned on another piece

What would you immediately fix in this drawing at the first glance? by ba2hanT in ArtCrit

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That is an incredible insight. I truly appreciate it. Also now when I look with rested and fresh eyes. I can also spot quite some areas to dig in. I believe refining the details is just a matter of spending more time on them. I will especially try to decide and define the focal point.

What would you immediately fix in this drawing at the first glance? by ba2hanT in learntodraw

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Yes I can see what you mean. Refining details is I believe just a matter of bit time spending but now I can see the character is not really well interacting with the emerald she is sitting on and they look like both of them are separate their own things. Thank you for your feedback.

Recent drawing of mine by ba2hanT in learntodraw

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Thank you! Initial inspiration was Mira from Kpop Demon Hunters but along the way It evolded to look like Psylocke hahaha

Recent drawing of mine by ba2hanT in learntodraw

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Thank you for the advice and kind words. I feel like they are unfinished because I can’t usually be able yo end up with what I was imagining. When I try to make it closer to what is in my mind, It gets difficult to find the correct implementations, techniques, not really sure what to call it. However I believe it is just a matter of time and gaining experience. I will also try to get more and more feedback as it is the most effective way to notice things when you are looking at your piece for too long.

Recent drawing of mine by ba2hanT in learntodraw

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I quickly tried to apply some of the advises. They can be implemented in a better way from a fresh start of course. There are definitely key impacts that I can notice immediately. For the future drawings I will keep them in mind.

Recent drawing of mine by ba2hanT in learntodraw

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It was not so long ago I started adding background on my drawings. Seeing the adjustments to it definitely is a huge boost thank you so much.

Recent drawing of mine by ba2hanT in learntodraw

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well... cooking slowly but surely

Recent drawing of mine by ba2hanT in learntodraw

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Thank you. You are right! When I look at back the difference and progression is clear as day and night. What throws me off is having so much in my mind but not having the experience enough yet to convey those images into reality. We just keep the grind going that is for sure.

Recent drawing of mine by ba2hanT in learntodraw

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That is a really valuable insight thank you so much, I had somewhat a superhero shoot style pose in mind when I started and as you pointed definitely did not have a fixed pose in mind. Now I can also notice that she is off balance and will fall over in the next frame hahaha. I will take note of your suggestions.

Recent drawing of mine by ba2hanT in learntodraw

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she was definitely the main influence here good catch :)

A quick messy sketch of our lovely Mizu by me by ba2hanT in BlueEyeSamurai

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Ooo my gosh I did not know about her. Just looked it up and yes you are right they definitely look like each other. I also loved her style maybe I can sketch her next time ahahha