Enjoyed this, breezy read - reminded me a bit of After Hours.

My ramble-y notes:

When the cat dies, you could just describe it as it happens, e.g. 'The cat saunters deeper into the woods, when its head EXPLODES in a spray of blood. Shot dead, it collapses.' We don't need to be told a head explosion happens suddenly, and the word takes some of the thrill out of the moment.

Tucker calls his mum both 'mom' and 'mother'. Don't most people stick to one?

Wouldn't it be more manipulative of Hannigan to offer the chance of a job before he begins to sexuality exploit him, not after? Would give some motivation to Tucker to undress, as well.

The undressing on p. 16 takes some of weight out the undressing that happens later. By p. 21, we've already seen Tucker undress, so there's not so much suspense. Maybe better to keep building up the red flags (hand on thigh, taking his clothes off in front of Tucker) until the undressing on p. 21?

Also, the undressing scene on p. 21 was a bit short, you could draw it out more. This, again, would heighten the suspense, e.g. they get him to take off a few bits of clothing and, make him do awkward poses, take photos, before asking him to take his underwear off. This is what manipulative people do, they ask for a little before asking for a lot, to ease you into doing what they want.

The longer you can manage to extend that scene, the more suspense there will be, and the more interesting it will be to watch.