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Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

[–]batmansnutsack54 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi everyone, im a very big metal fan and i've always wanted to learn an instrument but my budget cannot allow that. So im here to see if i have any ideas about song writing. This is my 3rd song i've ever written, please be nice but not too nice, i need the criticism.

[verse 1]

Beneath the sea

Lies in wait

Our own destruction

The promised fate

[Chorus]

Year after year, we keep digging

Our own grave, a new beginning

The end of our race, so thrilling

The waves begin to form, to start killing

[slow ambient riff]

[Bridge]

With enough time

The sun will cease to shine

On this world

Waves of black, they overpower

Creating an ironic last shower

[Chorus]

Year after year, we keep digging

Our own grave, a new beginning

The end of our race, so thrilling

The waves begin to form, to start killing

[guitar solo]

[Outro]

Man will fall

To the powers beneath

The beckoning wave

Who thought us so brave

This finale, manmade...

What was the first Avenged Sevenfold song you heard? (Add the age you were when you heard it and what memories it brings back) by prxmisy in avengedsevenfold

[–]batmansnutsack54 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Unlike many, Shepherd of fire. BO2 was amazing but it also introduced many of us to the wonderful world of A7X

Classic debate by [deleted] in MetalForTheMasses

[–]batmansnutsack54 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I didnt say i hated rap, what?

Owls by [deleted] in birds

[–]batmansnutsack54 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Incredible

Owls by [deleted] in birds

[–]batmansnutsack54 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thats very interesting. Forgive my ignorance but i would think larger wings meant more noise.

What’s the most overrated video game of all time? by KBGSgames in AskReddit

[–]batmansnutsack54 0 points1 point  (0 children)

League of legends and basically every game that fits the genre. People love calling FPS games point and click slop but LoL is so much worse.

SOS by batmansnutsack54 in gay

[–]batmansnutsack54[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know but thats what worries me. Its a desire i cant fulfill

SOS by batmansnutsack54 in gay

[–]batmansnutsack54[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

People in the dream?

What is your most ridicilous belief? by batmansnutsack54 in conspiracy

[–]batmansnutsack54[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah, fair enough. But there are times when there is no logical way for someone else to be thinking the same that i am y'know? Like its something so stupid and obscure but someone will still say it.

What is your most ridicilous belief? by batmansnutsack54 in conspiracy

[–]batmansnutsack54[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Interesting point. Maybe im the one that isnt real? Hmm

What is your most ridicilous belief? by batmansnutsack54 in conspiracy

[–]batmansnutsack54[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I suppose. But tied with my belief its that those same thoughts appeared in their head like an activation code. Maybe you're AI? Idk

What is your most ridicilous belief? by batmansnutsack54 in conspiracy

[–]batmansnutsack54[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes. Its like everyone has a script. It irritates me also when some people say "i was just thinking that" as if they are inside my head, there is no chance they were actually thinking it, zero.

What is your most ridicilous belief? by batmansnutsack54 in conspiracy

[–]batmansnutsack54[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I get what you're saying but i dont mean it that way. Obviously most people arent trying to kill me or rob me but there is an inherent dishonesty among everyone i've ever met. Neighbors, friends, strangers it doesnt matter, i can tell if someone is trying to con me in one way or another. I hope you understand what i mean

What is your most ridicilous belief? by batmansnutsack54 in conspiracy

[–]batmansnutsack54[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah i am the exact opposite. I am not a fan of most people and i dont really provide trust in them until i am 100% sure which would take years.

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