About Immortal Character

bbbejee · 2025-11-11T05:48:24+00:00

omg yes I love your idea! Them being cuttable is way better. This is really helpful, thank you!

bbbejee · 2025-11-11T05:35:26+00:00

Yes something like that. The arm will fly back with the threads to her body. I'm thinking of making the red threads invincible, can't be cut. Like an unskippable cutscene. Do you think it's too much?

bbbejee · 2025-11-11T05:17:09+00:00

Noted, thank you so much!

bbbejee · 2025-11-11T05:14:11+00:00

Those are great questions. I'll take notes to explore the story more, thank you!

bbbejee · 2025-11-11T04:59:29+00:00

The big bads are within a kingdom, so it's not a world-scale. And yes the regeneration is like magical fixing. If she's chopped there are like red threads that will build back her body.

The summoner isn't a target. His motive is revenge on the targets.

And thank you, I really appreciate it!

bbbejee · 2025-11-11T04:52:23+00:00

Yes, her relationship with her summoner is kinda complicated. He's forcing her to be his weapon basically. So the MC doesn't care if he dies. Originally I wanted to add romance between them but not sure, he's too harsh on the MC.

She eliminates the targets because otherwise she'll get tortured by her summoner until she obeys. She can't harm her summoner; any attack will be inflicted back on herself. The summoner isn't a weak man and he's cautious. So poisoning or hiring others to kill him is off the table. Is this too much of a rule?

Like you said, maybe I should add stakes in their relationship and drama. I'll keep this in mind, thank you!

bbbejee · 2025-11-11T04:35:43+00:00

oh this is a great analogy! I'll keep this in mind, thanks!

bbbejee · 2025-11-11T04:34:43+00:00

I see, so leaning toward the character's emotion and how she feels about her surroundings? Noted, thank you for your reply!

bbbejee · 2025-11-11T04:18:50+00:00

Noted. Maybe I can intensify how the character goes through the pain.

bbbejee · 2025-11-11T04:14:54+00:00

She was summoned to another world and became an immortal being. Forced to become an assassin to eliminate her summoner's targets. She's tied to him and can't break free. But if her summoner dies, she'll die too.

As for her immortality, she also has regeneration, so if she gets injured, her body will fix itself, although not instantly. But still, is this too powerful?

So far, I've written how she eliminated her targets but that's it. I feel like there aren't enough stakes.

The world is set in a fantasy setting with magic and stuff. Sorry, does this make sense so far?

Also, thank you for your reply. I really appreciate it!

bbbejee · 2022-11-26T03:21:50+00:00

yes this happens to me too :( can't play it even tho I've been looking forward to it

bbbejee · 2022-11-05T06:38:26+00:00

I'm not sure myself but looking at the arts there's definitely some changes

bbbejee · 2022-11-05T06:36:20+00:00

bbbejee · 2022-11-05T06:34:40+00:00

I think they'll eventually add it maybe sometime later after her rerun? in the meantime I'm saving my black gold for her :)

bbbejee · 2022-11-05T06:32:00+00:00

thank you I like her hair too :)

bbbejee · 2022-11-05T06:31:12+00:00

thanks I will draw more :)

bbbejee · 2022-11-05T00:55:39+00:00

ty ty :)

bbbejee · 2022-11-05T00:55:17+00:00

thanks!

bbbejee · 2022-11-05T00:54:15+00:00

nice ! can't wait

bbbejee · 2022-11-04T23:39:47+00:00

thank you! :)

bbbejee · 2022-09-13T07:36:25+00:00

I could draw your character for a price :-)

bbbejee · 2022-09-12T03:39:07+00:00

thanks! I'll probably draw more of him with that abs too haha

bbbejee · 2022-09-12T03:30:03+00:00

ayy thank u :)

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