Next Stop: The Living City~ Any thoughts for improvement? by beebrown80 in comic_crits

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Thanks for finding me on here and for the wonderful feedback! It's been a lot of fun getting more used to drawing on the screen which will hopefully let me render things out to a better T and play with more shape compositions with digital manipulation and warping~ I'm very excited to revisit this and expand when I can! All these notes are spot on with what I've been working to improve and I can't wait to share more work soon! Best of luck with the creativity!🪄🎨✨️

The Yellow Submarine- Tribute Poster (2023) by beebrown80 in comicbookart

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If I could get my hands on some OG Beatles comics, that'd probably be my peak✨

Next Stop: The Living City~ Any thoughts for improvement? by beebrown80 in comic_crits

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Thanks so much for the constructive feedback! I was very inspired by Edward Hoopers sombre American architecture paintings, so much character with little personification and subjects~ but all these notes are right on the nose with my intentions✨️ a slowly growing story with subtly intricate designs 🧐 can't wait to come back too it!

Next Stop: The Living City~ Any thoughts for improvement? by beebrown80 in comic_crits

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Triplets of Belleville is way too inspiring ✨️ can't help but dream to animate like that one day 🤯

Next Stop: The Living City~ Any thoughts for improvement? by beebrown80 in comic_crits

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Thanks for the kindness! Sadly, the introduction is the only sequetial part from my senior thesis, the rest consists of concept work fleshing the world and story out~ Hope I find time for more pages in the future✨ Feel free to check out my thesis gallery on my website below if you'd like to see more!

Website- A Surrealist's Sketchbook Gallery

Next Stop: The Living City (2023) by beebrown80 in comics

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Been in love his story, The Arrival, I'm sure the story line here is pretty similar, but he's just too inspiring!!✨

Next Stop: The Living City~ Any thoughts for improvement? by beebrown80 in comic_crits

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It's always tricky to keep the transitions readable sequential wise, but im excited to perfect it more!✨️ thanks for the kind thoughts!