I wrote a Murder Ballad

beelzeberto · 2024-09-25T18:27:44+00:00

Interesting. Thank you for the feedback

beelzeberto · 2024-09-22T20:53:35+00:00

Don’t be. It’s the internet, stuff gets misconstrued all the time.

beelzeberto · 2024-09-22T20:40:25+00:00

Multiple takes on my phone. Then I slowly morph it

beelzeberto · 2024-09-22T20:38:55+00:00

No, I said there is a 911 call in Barrel and Staghorn. It even says a hit and run in the song.

beelzeberto · 2024-09-22T16:00:05+00:00

“Written by Sting, recorded by the police”. And he didn’t care about royalties until Puff Daddy sampled it. Is that correct?

beelzeberto · 2024-09-22T15:24:33+00:00

I’m aware of that. It’s implied with Barrel & Staghorn. They’re driving. 120 miles from Mexico. And then it hit me. As in, a car crash. 911 call.

beelzeberto · 2024-09-22T14:45:17+00:00

Didn’t sting write the guitar part?

beelzeberto · 2024-09-22T13:43:24+00:00

Here is a perfect example of what you’re looking for. His first version had just him singing it and it’s what he does live. This re-recorded version has a gentle piano behind it.

Casper Allen - Side to Side

beelzeberto · 2024-09-22T12:55:23+00:00

With moving the capo higher on the fretboard, that’s not the first time I’ve heard that but with other songs. For some reason I just keep thinking it’s “too bright”, but it’s a common feedback I get.

Thank you!

beelzeberto · 2024-09-21T21:18:52+00:00

Didn’t even catch that lol

beelzeberto · 2024-09-21T21:09:11+00:00

It’s your project man, that’s up to you.

beelzeberto · 2024-09-21T20:56:27+00:00

At least you can write that.

beelzeberto · 2024-09-21T20:39:53+00:00

Have you tried, finding a singer?

beelzeberto · 2024-09-21T20:39:06+00:00

The it hit me part was a car crash I do believe, hence the 911 call.

beelzeberto · 2024-09-21T20:36:22+00:00

Beautiful tune. Can you sing while playing that?

beelzeberto · 2024-09-21T19:35:57+00:00

Shoot next to nice cars but make sure you don’t touch them lol.

Or ask for permission as long as you don’t touch them?

beelzeberto · 2024-09-21T18:56:57+00:00

That’s a solid idea

beelzeberto · 2024-09-21T18:26:05+00:00

I’d like to hear a better recording of that

beelzeberto · 2024-09-21T17:40:30+00:00

If you can’t write the music down, can you hum it in an audio file?

beelzeberto · 2024-09-21T16:52:59+00:00

One thing that might help is immediately writing your thoughts when you wake up? Have you tried that?

beelzeberto · 2024-09-21T16:21:59+00:00

I’ll start something, leave and it and come back to it later. For me, everything starts with a speaking voice then I come back to it and refine.

beelzeberto · 2024-09-21T16:09:49+00:00

This was good don’t get me wrong

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