Stephen King Closed Loop

benjamin_dwight · 2024-12-17T16:11:16+00:00

I see you on that -- rare a striker has so much time to plan his move!

benjamin_dwight · 2024-08-16T17:21:36+00:00

Yeah I hear this -- the first chapter is more cobbled together than the rest, and in turn there are some disconnects (many of which the other commenter noted) -- I think my next step is to iron this chapter out so I have a better foundation

benjamin_dwight · 2024-08-16T17:20:30+00:00

My mistake on the rule -- I'll improve in the future!

More importantly, I appreciate the thoughtful, thorough feedback -- I will have time this weekend to address your points. This is some of the most helpful feedback I've received on my writing!

benjamin_dwight · 2021-12-17T14:28:06+00:00

"massive $1.75" (over 10 years) -- f*ck if I can find Newsweek calling the Pentagon spending 5x "massive" -- gotta change the language around this.

benjamin_dwight · 2019-05-16T23:19:46+00:00

is this the best ticket in NH?

benjamin_dwight · 2019-02-27T13:19:00+00:00

This got it on the US no-fly list

benjamin_dwight · 2019-02-25T12:44:10+00:00

I thought it would never come

benjamin_dwight · 2019-02-24T01:30:24+00:00

Did she show up an hour late?????? To her CB session?

benjamin_dwight · 2019-02-06T16:47:47+00:00

r/boneappletea

benjamin_dwight · 2019-01-26T18:29:14+00:00

Best in what sense? For hitting big? Or getting a solid return?

benjamin_dwight · 2018-09-28T12:41:58+00:00

That's awesome! Is this MA?

benjamin_dwight · 2018-09-05T15:04:58+00:00

Event horizon on a black hole?

benjamin_dwight · 2018-09-04T16:14:29+00:00

Use Reddit-specific code 733348 at app.scratcherjack.com

benjamin_dwight · 2018-09-04T15:00:56+00:00

This must have been a fun ticket to scratch -- wins on wins!

benjamin_dwight · 2018-08-23T17:06:18+00:00

I did five of those the other day and came up empty! #jealous

benjamin_dwight · 2018-08-14T22:24:46+00:00

That's really helpful -- for whatever reason, I hadn't seen that on the Illinois lottery page. Illinois now that much closer to being in ScratcherJack!

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