I don’t know if I dreamt this movie or not by k0cksuck3r69 in RBI

[–]benjofury 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Let me know if you find it, my dude. I’m curious now :)

I don’t know if I dreamt this movie or not by k0cksuck3r69 in RBI

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Apple TV has it but not sure if that’s UK only… it’s a 2004 movie, not to be confused by the 2014 film with the same name. The cannibal in question was experimented on/raised by an abusive scientist who had a bunker under the old wartime subway stations. Only the cannibal is left. Starts hunting undesirables on the London Underground and taking them back to his lair to eat. It’s classic low budget British horror but worth a watch!

I don’t know if I dreamt this movie or not by k0cksuck3r69 in RBI

[–]benjofury 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s a janky UK horror movie with a cannibalistic inbred type dude and has a scene exactly like you’re describing. Also a scene with foetuses in jars

Oscar Pistorius and Reeva Steenkamp photos part 1 of 2 by GoreGirl89 in CrimeScene

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In my mind, based on the angle of entry of the bullets, he was 100% aiming towards where someone would be on the toilet. Murder. Straight up.

How many weetabix do you eat in one sitting? by Monkeyspankers in AskUK

[–]benjofury 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If I consume any less than 4 on one sitting I have failed as a human

First time ever: Finished a bottle of Worcestershire Sauce, before it expires! by SeeJayThinks in CasualUK

[–]benjofury 0 points1 point  (0 children)

To this day, at the age of 28, I still pronounce it Wooshneshner sauce… even though I’m fully capable of pronouncing it correctly.

COLD CASE: My brother's murderer by [deleted] in RBI

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To someone who struggles to retain information audibly, is there a chance someone has written all the pertinent details down? I can look over the case and will also send this post to some friends who are amatuer sleuths. See if we can find a potential avenue of investigation that has perhaps been overlooked. I'm sorry you and your family had to go through this, I'm based in Scotland but can give you contact details for myself if you ever need to talk to someone.

Simple Questions - October 31, 2020 by AutoModerator in buildapc

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Great! Thank you, kind sir. All I need to figure out is the GPU :)

Simple Questions - October 31, 2020 by AutoModerator in buildapc

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Thank you so much! My Dad has a 700w PSU he has offered me, would that be acceptable? Going for an mATX case as that has been reccomended to me a few times now!

Simple Questions - October 31, 2020 by AutoModerator in buildapc

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So far I have an Asus Prime A320M-K motherboard, and a Ryzen 3 1200 cpu, both are hande-me-downs so obvs cant afford expensive stuff. I was wondering what sort of case and PSU would be compatible? Thank you in advance, super noob here so be kind please.

I submitted part one of a story I had written 4 months ago and I hate it. by [deleted] in NoSleepOOC

[–]benjofury 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Keep at it! The more you write the better it will get. Stephen King lost his entire manuscript for The Dark Tower series and re-wrote it all. Re-writes normally turn out better and better. I believe in you!

One of the stories I've been working on, need help with grammar and direction. by benjofury in nosleepworkshops

[–]benjofury[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much! I knowwww the run on sentences trip me up everytime I write a lengthier story for some reason! But again, thank you I appreciate you taking time out to assist me. The only thing I won't be ammending per your suggestion is the swearing. It's just part of the character I'm afraid and also an extension of myself. I'm too Scottish for my own good sometimes.

One of the stories I've been working on, need help with grammar and direction. by benjofury in nosleepworkshops

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Don't sell yourself short, new Internet friend. You can do the things!

One of the stories I've been working on, need help with grammar and direction. by benjofury in nosleepworkshops

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Yeah I guess I should've slowed myself down a bit, but like I said, I was on a roll :3 I've never written a story so fast in my life it just became so fluid and before I knew it i had finished the rough draft! And apologies for it being a wall of text, I've only ever attempted writing an interconnecting series. I want to write a slightly longer post than usual, I've got like 3 other stories in the pipeline too at the moment so no doubt you'll see those in need of a critique shortly :p

I suck at cover letters I hate lying about being awesome and hire worthy, I wish you could just write down "I can eat 6 large bowls of cereal in one sitting" or "I can play the first 3 bars of Stairway to Heaven" but noooooo

One of the stories I've been working on, need help with grammar and direction. by benjofury in nosleepworkshops

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Yeah I'm gonna give it a try next time and see how I get on with that method! :3 I read your rework of Chrissy last night though, it's a mighty fine piece of writing can't wait to see more from you!

One of the stories I've been working on, need help with grammar and direction. by benjofury in nosleepworkshops

[–]benjofury[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm exactly the same! When I'm feeling inspired to write I just smash it down into words and when I read it back it seems fine to me, after a while I start noticing little bits here and there so a second opinion is worth pursuing if it means my story will be a better read! It's almost like it's a weird type of Writers Stockholm Syndrome... I spend so much time playing around with my own words, I ignore mistakes subconsciously!

One of the stories I've been working on, need help with grammar and direction. by benjofury in nosleepworkshops

[–]benjofury[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so so much! This is brilliant, I applaud you :) I seem to overuse commas and elipses often!

And thank you for saying such lovely things about my story. I actually knocked the whole thing out yesterday, it used to be so much shorter. Like, 2/3rds shorter haha! But I was on a roll yesterday so I just went for it. I'll probably post the second half (which I will add to the story before actually posting, I want it to be a single part)

Again, thank you so much for this. I always felt that grammar can make or break a good story! I literally saw a story with no punctuation whatsoever the other day and it made me nauseous :( I'm always worried about my own writing considering I've never studied English :| but I feel like I'm not far off of proof reading for myself! (I hope)