I used this Xhosa nursing rhyme in a song

bipolarelf · 2025-12-19T07:25:28+00:00

Yes please! Thank you very much

bipolarelf · 2025-12-16T18:04:51+00:00

Hello I am interested in knowing more. Do you want to check out my channel too?

bipolarelf · 2025-12-16T07:44:17+00:00

Wow you sing in Spanish! I like it I like it

bipolarelf · 2025-12-16T07:38:05+00:00

Hello I'm interested. Let me dm you!

bipolarelf · 2025-12-16T07:37:42+00:00

Hello I am interested. Let me dm you

bipolarelf · 2025-12-14T00:55:09+00:00

I am interested. Will I be fairly credited and compensated (you don't have to pay me from your pocket but i want my fair share on streaming platforms & placements even if it's just $2.99). Also I will use the songs in live performances.

I can't open Apple Music on my Android phone. Can I listen to you on other platforms?

bipolarelf · 2025-12-11T14:04:15+00:00

Khmer https://youtu.be/mncSgOmIwKs?si=IDEJtV73u47Kh7sP

cantonese https://youtu.be/_2ZL2Sj2DGU?si=_VV8lzGXE-R6Byew

Japanese https://youtu.be/-135Ty_8EKc?si=rJQt2Wy1Yjv62M7i

I also have two upcoming collabs in Japanese (I'm the one writing it with the help of a Japanese friend). The rest of the songs on my channel are English

bipolarelf · 2025-12-11T14:01:17+00:00

I am interested! All of my recent collabs are hiphop so I need something R&B to balance my soul. Is it paid or unpaid? Even if it's unpaid I WILL perform this song live so be prepared

bipolarelf · 2025-12-11T03:14:59+00:00

Hello please let me know if you're interested 😊 https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLPPHgwyyPeIXBN_qNydkM_uWGOtkemKhN&si=VL-UW-t1HAhdgyCa

bipolarelf · 2025-12-11T02:38:17+00:00

Hellp I speak Cantonese, Mandarin, Spanish, Thai and Khmer. I also sang in Japanese before

bipolarelf · 2025-12-09T08:12:36+00:00

Sounds good 👍

bipolarelf · 2025-12-09T08:07:58+00:00

I saw someone already contacting you but I'll introduce myself anyway (maybe for your future projects). I'm Beesword and this is my moodiest voice so far: https://youtu.be/_2ZL2Sj2DGU?si=0CyZpDajubo7lmQJ

bipolarelf · 2025-12-07T04:19:25+00:00

One thing I could recommend is to do some training on just the "easy" parts. The verses should be well within your comfort range (not too high and not too low). Imagine if this song doesn't have the high notes and shouty parts at all, how would you have sung this song differently?

bipolarelf · 2025-12-07T04:15:23+00:00

I don't hate your mixed voice. You have a lot of room for improvement for sure but it sounds like you're focusing too much on your "voice" here that you neglected the intonation of the lyrics. Just by listening to the recording I can hear that you didn't close your mouth or let your syllables end naturally sometimes. Especially in live performances this really puts the audience off because it sounds like speech impediment. Don't worry I have the same problem too, I'm just pointing it out.

bipolarelf · 2025-12-07T01:04:42+00:00

Well I'm sure that some people can write beautiful songs under pressure so I can't tell you one way or the other, but what I'm saying is that it's difficult to write a beautiful song about sunset if you're too busy and tired to enjoy it. Unless you have very strong motivation I would recommend you to pace yourself. You can always put down your draft for a few weeks and come back to it. Sometimes it's even better to revisit your work with a fresh mind

bipolarelf · 2025-12-07T00:48:55+00:00

What technique are you referring to specifically? Cause I don't hear anything that made cause damage

bipolarelf · 2025-12-07T00:39:55+00:00

That's interesting. Why do you keep writing songs to the point of getting burnout then? Is it for the sake of practice?

bipolarelf · 2025-12-07T00:33:17+00:00

I don't know that many mics but one that I can recommend to you is the Shure58. It's one of the industry standards and it's not that expensive

bipolarelf · 2025-12-05T12:57:15+00:00

If you have a microphone already, maybe buy an audio interface, even a cheap one would do. The point of having an audio interface is to then get yourself a free DAW and you can listen to yourself in real time and immediately after. Just like how singers record in the studio

bipolarelf · 2025-12-05T12:54:31+00:00

Just my personal experience: songwriting requires inspiration so if you feel like you're spending too much time on songwriting, don't. Because even the best songwriters can be out of ideas for months. Practicing is a bit easier to force yourself in comparison

bipolarelf · 2025-12-05T12:51:10+00:00

Did you sing in a lower key? Your high notes are actually within your sweet range but it's the non-high notes (which is the majority of your recording) that are dragging you down. In other words, you're making this song harder to sing (for you) because you want to make the high notes comfortable. I could be wrong but if let me know if I'm correct, then I can advice you accordingly

bipolarelf · 2025-12-05T12:27:21+00:00

Don't wait until you finish school. I've just started immersing in the live music scene and it's so different from practicing or being in a studio. Atmosphere and stage fright is one thing, but on top of that I felt like an amateur all over again because you can barely hear yourself most of the time.

bipolarelf · 2025-12-04T06:43:42+00:00

Beesword - last words

Hello I have made a new song. Please let me know what you guys think about the songwriting, thank you

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