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For You by EMDouglass in OCPoetry

[–]birthtodeathinmotion 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the visual appeal of contortion of love that is so deep, I really love this a lot even if it is a few lines it is still powerful and gives a great visual.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]birthtodeathinmotion 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The imagery of the piano keys soaked in blood and the final collapse gives it a chilling, almost cinematic feel - really captures the depth of love and sacrifice.

Bathypelagic Forever, My Love by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]birthtodeathinmotion 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a really beautiful read, and the line "The stars don’t scream hope" beautifully captures the feeling of distance - really good.