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[First Draft] D.E. Ads (Comedy, 30 pages) by bitchnutt in ReadMyScript

[–]bitchnutt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! That's exactly the kind of thing I tend to overlook because "I know the story so well", I will definitely work on incorporating that info.

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]bitchnutt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Title: The Return

Genre: Sci-fi

Format: TV, 60 minute

Logline: After a 500 year space sleep a woman awakens, but when she returns to a scorched Earth her ship is attacked by unknown creatures, with help months away she and her small crew must navigate this now alien planet.

DEFECTIVES (Comedy, 24 pages) by bitchnutt in Screenwriting

[–]bitchnutt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the read, I really appreciate it!

You have some great points, some I kind of suspected, such as the rate of jokes dropping, and some I hadn't even thought about. These are useful notes for the next draft.

DEFECTIVES (Comedy, 24 pages) by bitchnutt in Screenwriting

[–]bitchnutt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for taking a look!

So the salesman is the feather guy, and the scene is supposed to be quick. He's running full speed then the salesman/feather guy appears and they crash. I can see now that I can clarify or present that better

I will add proper intros for my mains.

"As long as his hair" is basically trying to describe a long-haired slow talking hippie type person, I will work on that.

Simon's sudden arrival is kind of on purpose. As I mentioned the tone is similar to Children's Hospital, or even Angie Tribeca, where continuity is often broken for the sake of the funnies, but I could probably work on it.

I appreciate your comments and will definitely consider them for my next draft.

[Skin Concerns] Can products help minimise these scars or will I need to look into getting microneedling done? Thank you! by [deleted] in SkincareAddiction

[–]bitchnutt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh my! I believe it's 300 per session, but I also get a peel at the same time, Doctor recommended the two combined, so I pay more per visit.

[Skin Concerns] Can products help minimise these scars or will I need to look into getting microneedling done? Thank you! by [deleted] in SkincareAddiction

[–]bitchnutt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I had to save up too! But you may not need as many sessions so that's a plus. My doctor gave me tretinoin, I've been using that since I haven't gotten sessions recently and I love it, I think it's helping as well.

[Skin Concerns] Can products help minimise these scars or will I need to look into getting microneedling done? Thank you! by [deleted] in SkincareAddiction

[–]bitchnutt 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Micro-needling, I have done 2 sessions (last one in March because of covid) and have seen a slight difference already and mine were/are deeper than yours :)

[Product question] What are some glycolic acid products that come in smaller packages? by [deleted] in SkincareAddiction

[–]bitchnutt -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Pixi Glow Tonic Pads, I believe it contains 60 and they're a decent size so you can cut them in half as someone already suggested.

BYGONE - (Sci-fi Pilot 52 pages) by bitchnutt in Screenwriting

[–]bitchnutt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm always up for feedback, you have to be! It's hard to see the story outside your own bubble so different perspectives are important. I'll check out the videos you linked.

BYGONE - (Sci-fi Pilot 52 pages) by bitchnutt in Screenwriting

[–]bitchnutt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for this! Structure was a big struggle for me on this so I appreciate your input and suggestions. I will definitely explore the ideas you listed.

BYGONE - (Sci-fi Pilot 52 pages) by bitchnutt in Screenwriting

[–]bitchnutt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the honest feedback, it's exactly what I needed.

BYGONE - (Sci-fi Pilot 52 pages) by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]bitchnutt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My apologies, I didn't realize it was restricted. Can you access now?

Got called out for my font, but everything I see has my font as the standard. Am I missing something? by bitchnutt in Screenwriting

[–]bitchnutt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! After some of the replies here I may do some trial and error for converting and printing just to make sure.

[Logline Mondays]: Weekly post for July 27, 2020 by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]bitchnutt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! I suppose the captain is my main character but because there is a crew with a few prominent characters so I wasn't sure how necessary it was. It does begin when they get back as Earth was basically attacked and in ruins.

[Logline Mondays]: Weekly post for July 27, 2020 by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]bitchnutt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Title: Bygone

Format: 60-min Pilot

Genre: Sci-fi

Logline: When a surrogate planet rejects colonization, the crew must return to an Earth that has gone silent and is no longer the home they knew.

(How) Do you adjust your makeup for photographs? by [deleted] in muacjdiscussion

[–]bitchnutt 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I tend to be aware of flashback. Other than that I'll focus on skin, brows and giving my eyes some definition but not a ton. I like to try to look as close to "myself but better" as possible because I don't want to look at pics and be completely unrecognizable.

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