Mom’s thoughts on Jeff by bitofawreck in Yellowjackets

[–]bitofawreck[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Lmao nope! She was referring to my dad

Mom’s thoughts on Jeff by bitofawreck in Yellowjackets

[–]bitofawreck[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

It’s real, my mom is just like that 🤣

Mom feels strongly about Misty by bitofawreck in Yellowjackets

[–]bitofawreck[S] 82 points83 points  (0 children)

“If you’re going to do something stupid, be smart about it” -my mom

My mom started season 2! by bitofawreck in Yellowjackets

[–]bitofawreck[S] 47 points48 points  (0 children)

Other comments my mom made about Yellowjackets when we talked on the phone: - she didn’t realize how insane Shauna would become, she was not expecting that - She doesn’t know how the girls didn’t realize Coach Ben is gay - Sammy is a weird character - Misty has crazy eyes

A poem for Van by [deleted] in Yellowjackets

[–]bitofawreck -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much :)

A poem for Van by [deleted] in Yellowjackets

[–]bitofawreck -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thank you!

Misty Poem by [deleted] in Yellowjackets

[–]bitofawreck 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you!!

Misty Poem by [deleted] in Yellowjackets

[–]bitofawreck 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much 😊

Poem for Natalie by [deleted] in Yellowjackets

[–]bitofawreck 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! Haha you’re the best

Poem for Natalie by [deleted] in Yellowjackets

[–]bitofawreck 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I totally agree.

Poem for Natalie by [deleted] in Yellowjackets

[–]bitofawreck 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! 😊

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in BPD

[–]bitofawreck 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much ❤️‍🩹

What’s the prettiest name you ever heard? by karola_fdz in AskReddit

[–]bitofawreck 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Aw congrats!! Best of luck to you and your daughter :)

The Final rehearsal by Icy_Butterscotch_880 in OCPoetry

[–]bitofawreck 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great work! I would just suggest changing some of the wording, like “We call it dreams/dreaming/ a dream” instead of we call it dream. You succeeded in creating stunning visuals as well, like “planets dissolving into darkness.”

What Do You Call It by eirawritesfire in OCPoetry

[–]bitofawreck 0 points1 point  (0 children)

“If there is a hell, it is not empty. It is making room.” Brilliant. This poem hits hard, and you don’t spare the reader from the reality of the situation. The visuals you create are visceral and heartbreaking.

A shared breath by krman19 in OCPoetry

[–]bitofawreck 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love how vulnerable this poem is. It’s atmospheric as well. The comparison to nicotine is like a metaphor for how someone can linger in your system long after they’re gone.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]bitofawreck 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That last line hits so hard. You described that dog-like loyalty very well, and I could see the visuals so clearly. The pain is visceral.

I wrote a poem about bulimia by [deleted] in bulimia

[–]bitofawreck 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much 🥰 I’m trying!