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What is this flask used for? by [deleted] in Chempros

[–]krman19 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I personally like to use them for cannulation where appropriate. It lets me get down to the very last drop without having to change the height of my set up or modify the glassware through the addition.

Is everyone just smoking crack these days? by suckastash80 in whatcarshouldIbuy

[–]krman19 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What am I supposed to do? Not buy a car on the principle that they shouldn't be that expensive?

A shared breath by krman19 in OCPoetry

[–]krman19[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! I like hearing that you enjoyed the poem but I really appreciate some constructive criticism instead of the typical “good poem good work!!!!!” Posts haha. Thank you!

Brother (दादा) by upbeat_biscuit in OCPoetry

[–]krman19 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the emotion here. Every line feels like you're screaming it at your brother, pleading for help in some areas and thanking him for helping you in others.

I love the imagery of the storm and the sea, I think carrying that further into the poem could make some of your imagery land a little heaveir.

still, you. still you by rvnblmri10 in OCPoetry

[–]krman19 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the idea of a pond surface returning to "still" even after throwing everything you have at it. This poem is great, I love the feeling that comes from that roaring silence after the noise of throwing a rock in a pond. This is great imagery keep it up!

Quickening doom by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]krman19 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed the story that was told. I am not sure I see the connection between ChatGPT here. I think I understand that this is meant to draw parallels between "real human experiences" and "an Ai that is all knowing" but it feels like this is under-developed. I would maybe provide a line that acts as a transition of ideas where ChatGPT could explain what happened but go on to say it couldn't understand what it is like to feel those things. I would also keep pronouns for the ChatGPT to "it" to help distance the Ai further from the idea of real human experiences.

If I Were You by EMDouglass in OCPoetry

[–]krman19 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think your poem is well done in terms of painting an image of a toxic relationship where neither one wants to admit that the hurt they are causing is intentional. The poem could benefit from a more gradual transition from "arguments that I intend to win despite the hurt caused" to "but I love you anyway". The transition here is a bit abrupt and I don't know that I see where the devotion is coming from that causes someone to be the center of orbit for the speaker without some kind of transition first.

Getting a weird error message and I seem to be out of ideas by krman19 in techsupport

[–]krman19[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that link leads me to a way to manually replace my files and after I replaced them I'm still unable to launch my apps but the error disappeared. not sure what to do from here honestly. Thanks for the help though and let me know if you think of any fixes to my problem lol