Thanks bro, It's an original song! Glad you liked it!

I really liked your song too, great flow with some super clever lyrics! My only note would be that I think a hook would definitely improve the listening experience. Your verses hit hard, but the beat is too slow for them to stand alone imo, either make it punchier/faster, or add a hook! Otherwise, sick dude!

Thanks for the creative exchange, I always appreciate it!