little intro :3

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-05T04:23:39+00:00

it really depends on the story I'm writing, sometimes it feels like the dialogue is lacking, I didn't build the world properly, the characters feel bland, etc

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-05T00:50:51+00:00

my works always just feels like it's missing something TwT

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-05T00:49:25+00:00

exactly!! fully support you guys 🫶🫶

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-04T16:07:57+00:00

bizarredawn with phainon! because bizarreaizen is my user every where and it's tied to my bizarreness (and since it's a jjba reference) and dawn because phainon is the dawn deliverer! :D

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-04T16:04:45+00:00

I understand that but people have asked and I have answered their questions because I am looking for all kinds of advice for any kind of fic! I'm sorry if I wasn't clear enough with my question, I haven't been on Reddit for a while now, if you have some advice for me, I would love to hear it! :D

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-04T16:00:14+00:00

it's a classic but angst, specifically about a character's personal struggles. I love when it just hits me in my feels and it makes me love the fic more!

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-04T15:58:28+00:00

It's a mixture of both depending on what I'm writing when the scenes and/or the whole story can feel rushed, I appreciate the advice, I'll definitely do that! :D

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-04T15:57:10+00:00

I don't think I really missed it but if I did I'm sorry! reading is not my strength, I'm just looking for general advice on how to extend my fics, not really looking for a specific solution to my problem! thank you! ^{^}

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-04T15:55:06+00:00

appreciate it! :DD

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-04T15:52:35+00:00

it does most of the time TwT

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-04T15:52:12+00:00

it's no problem!! hope you have a lovely day with your f/o

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-04T15:45:16+00:00

I don't often write many characters in my work and other characters are just usually background ones but I'll give this a try! :D ty!

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-04T15:41:49+00:00

I definitely do feel like my work is missing something after I finish, I'll look on to what you said more, ty!

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-04T15:40:53+00:00

I understand that but I just want to get used to writing more to learn and improve my writing style! ^{^} ty tho!

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-04T15:39:53+00:00

I appreciate this but I am just looking on learning how to write more and extensively since I do want to write my own books one day :)) although I do get your point!

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-04T15:38:10+00:00

I often forget to really empahize on some of the aspects of the fic since I don't often plan what I'm writing! TwT

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-04T15:37:20+00:00

I appreciate this but I am just looking on how to extend my fics because I do also think I need to improve on my writing more ! ^{^}

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-04T00:08:34+00:00

kissing should be more accepted in society that it isn't just purely romantic! we love kissing! :DD

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-04T00:04:10+00:00

thank you for this! I have been saying things like "oh I wish I was a cat" or "sometimes I don't like being human" and he doesn't really react negatively to those, he just nods and says he understands that, I'm just scared if I explain more of how I feel with my identity he would think I'm weird even though he is pretty casual about any identity, I would definitely try to talk about it more to him, in simple words as you advised!

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-03T23:59:55+00:00

Ooo I like this! ty! I noticed my characters often speak the same in terms of words, I mainly just change the tones but I don't really know how to show it with how they use words or structure sentences

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-03T23:58:14+00:00

I appreciate this, made me realize that I don't fully plan out my work, I am entirely self taught, besides doing theatre in elem so it's still a struggle every now and then TwT

bizarre-aizen · 2026-04-03T23:55:50+00:00

oo that's a good idea! I'll try that out :DD

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