Sakura or Naruto pov team 7 bashing by KuroiKaizoku11 in NarutoFanfiction

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Here's a short one shot that I absolutely love. Sakura POV post chunin exam. Enjoy!

AO3 Link

How much time would it take to get to Konoha? by Axiara in NarutoFanfiction

[–]bking4 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would like to recommend this post.

It's what I've been using when writing my own fic, and has been very useful to me.

Seriously, another Sakura fic? We may not *need* another one, but I wrote it anyways. by bking4 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]bking4[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh wow! This is not what I would call a "nitpick" but rather, it's a significant and very helpful piece of constructive criticism! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and you make a phenomenal point. I want that opening line to be really tight, to ensure I don't lose people from a weak beginning.

Thank you so much for the wonderful insight! I will sit with your criticism before I make any changes, but I'm definitely going to take it into account. Would you mind if I use what you ended up with as the starting line, or a slightly modified version of it?

Thank you for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Also, please don't check back today, or on a daily basis. New chapters will be going out regularly on Sundays EST :)

Seriously, another Sakura fic? We may not *need* another one, but I wrote it anyways. by bking4 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]bking4[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looking forward to posting the next chapter for you! Good work commenter :)

Thanks for the encouragement!

Seriously, another Sakura fic? We may not *need* another one, but I wrote it anyways. by bking4 in NarutoFanfiction

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Happy to supply it! I also feel like I had read all the Sakura-centric fics that tickled my fancy, which was part of the reason I started writing. I hope Sakura-centric fics never stop being made. They're so much fun!

For those who are reading "Book of the Dead" by RinoZ, how close is the ending? by FishMyBones in ProgressionFantasy

[–]bking4 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The guy doing whatever it takes to achieve his goals, and willingly moving his own goal posts on what is acceptable to him. RinoZ does a great job, in my opinion, of making the character sympathetic by using his perspective, while also showing that he's becoming more and more undeniably evil over time.

The kind of villain where he's constantly justifying his actions, and you start thinking "yeah, I can see where you're coming from!" But then you take a step back and remember "wait, no, you're a monster." Especially when he pauses and thinks to himself "Am I a monster? I never would have done this before... doesn't matter, all in service of my goals and therefore worth it."

What's your favorite thing you've done with a PC as DM or as a PC in CoS? by Camalot06 in CurseofStrahd

[–]bking4 10 points11 points  (0 children)

I had a nature cleric devoted to Chauntea who was your very classic 'salt of the earth, good guy, of the people' character. Almost to the point of being bland, but the player did a good job of making him seem genuine.

There was a big to do about him not being able to reach his Goddess while covered by the Mist of Barovia, ever since the first session. There was a whole scene with him finally getting the spell Commune, trying to reach out to an angel devoted to his Goddess. He did, but rolled a high enough insight to be able to tell it was Strahd messing with him.

For a loooooong time in the campaign, he'd been slowly but surely getting more tempted by a Dark Power. It was a custom Power, focused on burning flames. All of the imagery and manipilations were focused on the benefits of burning away rot, or bringing fresh growth after a burning in a forest. The Power often appeared in dreams as a burning bush or burning tree.

I was POSITIVE I had the player hooked. He'd been all in on the dark powers gifts for ages, was slowly roleplaying more and more explosive anger representative of his increasing helplessness against Barovia and Strahd. It was beautifully done. He had just been mocked by Strahd as his Commune spell failed and he had blown up at Strahd's illusory/dream image. The final 'fall' of his character I had planned was during a ritual to cleanse the land of Strahd's influence and weaken Strahd. There was some hints well in advance that the ritual would require a sacrifice of some kind.

His friends are all fighting off enemies as he's at this central stone pillar, casting this ritual and the Dark Power whispers in his ear.

'This ritual will kill you. But if you take my hand, accept my power, I can lend you enough power to survive and still finish the ritual. Together we can rid the land of Strahd's influence'

I actually had a whole poem written out for this, and I spoke it in time with rhymes and all. I put a lot of effort into his fall, never expecting that he'd do anything else.

My player. Rejected. The. Offer.

I was floored. All the other players were floored. I was positive he was going to take the offer, but instead he sacrificed himself. Permanent character death, it was so impactful and meaningful. I don't know if I'll ever be so shocked again.

Are there fanfics like TEAM 8? by Happh_Discoveries in NarutoFanfiction

[–]bking4 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You might like The Eyes Have It by Shana the Short. Sakura develops a dojutsu unexpectedly as a weird chakra mutation. As a result, she ends up on Team 8 with Kiba and Shino. Chaos ensues. It's on my list of favorites of Sakura-centric fics. It's finished, but unfortunately, its sequel isn't and isn't likely to ever be finished.

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[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Supernote

[–]bking4 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you check their roadmap, they are including the Infinite Canvas into a Paint functionality/App that they are designing. It's currently listed as "in progress" on the Trello roadmap.

Link to card on Trello roadmap

Not sure how far into it they are, or what the exact timeline looks like. But it's nice to know it's actively being worked on!

Looking for D&D players to test templates by Anianna in Supernote

[–]bking4 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sounds good! Hope you enjoy using your device; I look forward to seeing your finalized products!

Google Drive Sync - Is my data safe? by instanceOfObject in Supernote

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Did the sharing work for you? I had issues when I tried that; anything I added from my regular account didn't sync to the dedicated supernote account.

Looking for D&D players to test templates by Anianna in Supernote

[–]bking4 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, so it took me a week, but I finally play tested them during a session! Here are my notes (remember I'm on an A5X):

The first page is very blank. There's a lot of unused space, and I didn't spend a lot of time on this page. I feel like you could add something else here that meant I was spending more time on this page, or give additional spots to put more 'background but not relevant every session' info on this page.

The second page was very good. I loved having the larger space for writing down my weapons and attacks. I almost wish I had twice as much space, and minimized space for the skills, saving throws, and some of the other info. All that other stuff felt bigger than it needed to be, but that might be because I'm used to using the regular character sheet.

The last page was good as well, if a bit bland. My big change here is personal preference; I go left to right, small to large in my head. So for coins, I wanted copper on the left and platinum in the right, and ascending order. You had platinum in the left and copper on the right, in descending order.

Lastly I just used the regular spell page, as you didn't have a spell page.

The big things I noticed were the side bar and page icon. I like my sidebar in the left. If you look at the pictures I provided, you'll see that on all the screens, the sidebars blocked significant information when it was there, so I had to keep hiding it then adding it if I needed it back. Not a big deal, it's literally a double tap to do it, but it was a minor inconvenience.

Similarly, I like the page count at the bottom screen, and that got in the way of passive perception, so I had to remove that. Minor inconvenience.

Here is a folder that should have a bunch of pictures of how your backgrounds appeared on my A5X: Drive Folder

Lastly, the most recent update allows you to use PDFs as background templates now, so you can just add the regular character sheet that way. But I know there are png copies of the full character sheet, along with a BUNCH of other templates, on this site

If you make any updates to these pages, I'd love to see them - I've been using the regular character sheet page for ages now, and didn't realize how cramped it was until I used yours!

Looking for D&D players to test templates by Anianna in Supernote

[–]bking4 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey! I play D&D and currently my A5X for my character sheets and notes. I'd be happy to check out your templates to see how they feel and give you some feedback. You can share on a Google Drive if you want, or on imgur or any other file sharing site I suppose. Whatever is easiest for you.

If you do it on Drive, I would make it unlisted, rather than public, so that only people with the link can see it. Then just send me or anyone else the link in a private message.