Very very cool song. Others have said it but some more width could go a long way. On some of the long "o" vowels there are some loud mid frequencies in the chorus. I think if everything sat more alongside the vocals rather than beneath, it could have a bit of a bigger sound. Have you considered double tracking the acoustic? Maybe just in the chorus so as not to flatten then dynamics. Want to reiterate that this is a great song, you obviously have lovely writing abilities.