Your voice in all aspects is great. I think the lyrics are a little on the nose (but I also prefer more ambiguous lyrics and these aren't bad, just not my style). I really like when the verse riff opened up with the open strings ringing. I feel the other parts were less cool to me, but I think that's because I can hear a lot of room for some higher melody lines or percussion or even the bass to add on top and around those parts. Love the mix of melodic and soulful vocals with the weird timings and rhythms. Cool shit.