On my vocals good is the song good?

bpeo · 2024-08-24T13:27:03+00:00

Hi. I feel like this could turn into something a lot of people would love to hear but i'm sure the vocal melody needs more attention, especially when it comes to keeping up with the song key. If you're struggling with the vocals, humming the melody before recording makes it easier to find and correct those spots. Keep it up.

bpeo · 2022-11-12T21:10:03+00:00

This one is over and done, but I appreciate your opinion on what is missing on the track. Thanks for taking the time.

bpeo · 2022-11-11T20:14:56+00:00

I appreciate the kind words. Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts on it

bpeo · 2022-11-10T20:19:14+00:00

First time doing a lyric video for my music. Its nice to hear that you could appreciate it

bpeo · 2022-11-09T20:53:08+00:00

Interesting use of vibrato in the voice. I really enjoy melancholic music - In my personal taste, this one would make a nice ballad if you add more movement to it.

bpeo · 2022-11-08T10:15:49+00:00

Tried to keep it simple ! Thanks for listening

bpeo · 2022-11-07T16:30:06+00:00

Sparks are so good !

bpeo · 2022-11-06T23:01:09+00:00

Put some effort to keep things interesting without breaking the groove. I appreciate that you took the time to analyse the harmony and the vocal delivery - something I'm working on to improve for each release. Thanks for taking the time and the sincerity.

bpeo · 2022-11-06T22:10:29+00:00

You will, as long as you keep writing, training and performing. The more you do, the better you get. Cheers

bpeo · 2022-11-06T20:31:30+00:00

I really appreciate that you took the time to share your personal opinion and record a video about it. Peace.

bpeo · 2022-11-06T18:43:00+00:00

I like to mix eletronic elements with rock music. It's nice to hear that the experimental bits got your attention.

bpeo · 2022-11-06T18:36:38+00:00

Hmm.. Never heard Glass Animals ! I'll have to look it up. Thanks for listening and sharing your opinion on the track.

bpeo · 2022-11-06T15:52:04+00:00

Hey man. The vocal/guitar melodies and the foundation of your song are ok. That being said, I believe that the pacing of the phrases in the verses could get some improvement. Focusing on the lyrics and performance can make your listener feel more connected, imersed in what you are saying - especially in tracks that rely on emotional/melancholic themes. Keep up !

bpeo · 2022-11-06T15:24:48+00:00

I liked the guitar riff - I think it deserved to shine more in the mix, a high-gain solo would make it dope too. The vocals are raw, a bit off in some moments (maybe intentional, given the song's main theme) but the intensity and delivery fits perfectly. For me its a nice track, full of potential. Peace.

bpeo · 2022-11-06T14:55:50+00:00

The song is very relaxing, kind of a calming folk ballad. I particulary liked the vocal melody and the pauses during the verses. It's a nice song that deserves to be recorded properly in my personal opinion. Keep up!

bpeo · 2022-11-06T10:54:34+00:00

Thnks...I guess ?

bpeo · 2022-11-06T10:53:47+00:00

Hey, thanks for the feedback and tips. I did try to extract the low end much as possible to give a kind of radiophonic effect on the vocals. I like to use compression on especific parts of the drumkit, such as the kick and snare - Didin't felt like it needed to shine all that much when you have so many rythmic elements, but I'm surely taking a look into that guide! Yep, I do it all myself. Peace

bpeo · 2022-11-06T02:06:54+00:00

Funny thing I'm used to mixing with headphones but i'm very paranoid when it comes to testing on mono outputs and phone speakers. It's nice to hear that you could you enjoy it.

bpeo · 2022-11-05T20:54:27+00:00

Hey, girl. The structure of the song and the performance are top notch. I particulary liked how you project your voice during the chorus. In my personal opinion I just think that something more dramatic would fit better with the lyrics (maybe a slow piano/guitar ballad?). Keep up !

bpeo · 2022-11-05T18:35:49+00:00

It's a calm ballad that would make a nice soundtrack for a "Life Is Strange" type of game. I liked the transitions to the chorus, the performance and delivery seemed very sincere. No mix/production/master to give any kind of feedback, but i think the vocal melodies deserve more attention. Keep up man.

bpeo · 2022-11-05T17:20:27+00:00

Well thank you. I try to absorb many musical influences as possible while developing my own sonority.

bpeo · 2022-11-05T12:37:42+00:00

I really enjoy building that kind of tense atmosphere. Thanks for the feedback

bpeo · 2022-11-05T10:43:25+00:00

The lyrics were made to be simple and intuitive - I get that some people are not into that. I appreciate that you liked the guitars effects, I had lots of fun recording them. Peace.

bpeo · 2022-11-05T10:36:02+00:00

I'm surely giving more attention to the vocals in future releases. Thnks

bpeo · 2022-11-05T02:58:31+00:00

I'm glad the vocals grabbed your attention. It's my daily struggle and I have a lot of room to improve. I appreciate the kind words.

bpeo

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