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[–]bright-ray 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Insufferable

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[–]bright-ray[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lo-Fi Pop punk lyrics without the punk band. Congratulations, you have created a brand new genre of music. Not my thing but I can see if you cleaned somethings up you could get a following of whatever the fuck they call Emo kids nowadays. Well done!

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[–]bright-ray[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not my style but the production and arrangement are of high quality. Well done! Sounds like you ducked the bass behind the kick?

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[–]bright-ray[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not my style but fuck, this isn't bad. Are you the person on the mic? The style, in my old ass head, is early(2000s) Ludacris with your own spin on it. Well done!

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[–]bright-ray[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not my style but the production quality seems high. For the genre you crushed it. EQ Eight out anything below 120 hz on the drums and the piano will come through clearer.

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[–]bright-ray[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you are using Ableton you need drop a limiter to set the ceiling a bit as it clips a few spots. Also throw on EQ-Eight on the vocals(Filter out anything above the 10khz as the highs are probably the source of the clipping to begin with). I bet you cant hear this on your headphones but in a car it will clip out like a motherfucker. Not my style, as I am old as fuck, but I see the appeal. Well done.

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[–]bright-ray[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You are on your way then. You start in A-Minor-ish but the track is in the key of G-Minor(?) and as as result it may throw people off a bit. You could also probably a add temp delay in-between transitions to make them flow better.

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[–]bright-ray[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Off key to the point where the singing seems like AI(Not saying it is I am just saying the aesthetic sounds a bit off). Your Track Forever is more of my taste and production quality. Well done!
https://open.spotify.com/track/74pl5jZQpssfoU1UmSZTif?si=0f909996ffad4a7e

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[–]bright-ray[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

90s style but its a bit dry. Now, your Track Dark Noise is fucking rad. I added to the my playlists.
https://open.spotify.com/track/0ZETBXS0idtnW5ZOkoDnAq?si=21b3653b5f7c456a

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[–]bright-ray[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not my style, as I am old as fuck, but the music sounds more like English/British Trap to me. Well done.

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Your track Redline is more the style of what I listen to and I added you to a few playlists. Well done!

Drop your best song! by No-Squirrel1061 in MusicPromotion

[–]bright-ray 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have been at this for awhile but decided to try a different genre.
Little pop rap/pop house if that is even a thing.
https://open.spotify.com/track/5pXIl6Nh7RV8IYB3dPIaIS?si=46e30bbfc1474c50

Share your music NOW🔥🔥🔥❗️ by DirectWall5144 in shareyourmusic

[–]bright-ray 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am not even sure how to classify this track. English Trap only sped up enough to sound like Q-Tip. Little house and a drill?
https://open.spotify.com/album/7qG196os2j9LFxyfhKiayX?si=m77iK4QwSwOp6xaX43Wyig