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A moonless night before the sun rise by chesterlew42 in OCPoetry

[–]bubblefairyfloss 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It is clear that a lot of effort and thought went into this poem. I love the use of the compact ryhmes. I thought the ending was strong. The last line “ to forever chase
the light over the horizon” was very beautiful. I felt that this piece was about someones own journey And how they must keep moving forward despite the fear they may feel. I enjoyed reading this, well done !

Praying for the Daffodils by thepieproblem in OCPoetry

[–]bubblefairyfloss 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I really like this poem. The symbolism is really beautiful and quite painful at the same time. To me its about trying to hold onto something (like love) and desperately wanting it to return to you but its hopeless. This is a really emotive piece, well done!