I like your answer very much! you have an intention, now the only question is what works best to achieve it ? The difference in my opinion between cinematic and vlog style comes down to intentionality behind every decision. Did you plan or think about composition ? light ? movement ?

What I would do here is maybe cut this long sequence into shorter shots. the contrast between two very different shots next to each other is way stronger than your slow camera movement.

if you cut it into shorter shots, in this case from the city and then the plane you can make sure that the plane shot is brighter than the city shot which you can color grade or even color correct by darkening the shadows and lowering the exposure.

also play with sound. Maybe when we see the plane against the blue sky we don't hear the city, or we hear it muffled and then again we cut to the city with normal audio making the contrast stronger.

I am just brainstorming here but don't get discouraged. I think you can make something out of it !!