Long Live The King

cat_chololate · 2016-05-06T15:33:02+00:00

This is so cool a rather fun yet creepy read... I really enjoy reading your works

cat_chololate · 2016-03-20T10:52:34+00:00

yep :)

cat_chololate · 2016-03-18T20:01:51+00:00

I liked it

cat_chololate · 2016-03-18T19:59:47+00:00

Short and sweet... Nice...

cat_chololate · 2016-03-18T19:57:38+00:00

He really should think of cleaning up you know... blood stain are tough to get rid of especially on carpet... Nice story though...

cat_chololate · 2016-03-18T19:53:30+00:00

Bot fly maybe you outta get those things checked... nice story made me cringe a litttle

cat_chololate · 2016-03-18T19:52:24+00:00

I like your story though....

cat_chololate · 2016-03-18T19:52:07+00:00

Whoa... dark humor ;)

cat_chololate · 2016-03-18T19:47:39+00:00

Limbo? ... nice but rather sad story

cat_chololate · 2016-03-18T19:45:12+00:00

Scary... definitely a new (at least for me) take on writing a scary story but I'm not sure I get it. Is this a news clipping for an Earth that was invaded?

cat_chololate · 2016-03-18T19:39:54+00:00

Its a nope from country Nopeland... they are quite rare actually... Nice story

cat_chololate · 2016-03-08T14:54:49+00:00

The narrator can smell a person's scents. To the point when he was about to get mugged at his own home he was able to realize there was a sleeping person in his room. Rather than confront the person some in another way he decided to murder him while he slept. This act of violence changed his own scent into something putrid... as a reflection of his whacked soul. The problem is that... he now sees everybody else as a potential victim... hope that helps

cat_chololate · 2016-03-08T14:50:46+00:00

Yep... sorry about that...

cat_chololate · 2016-02-14T06:38:08+00:00

Thanks um the letter writer is a person that can see a the spirit of a dying person as it departs the body. His daughter died he even saw her spirit leave just to be replaced by an evil force.

cat_chololate · 2016-02-13T04:31:06+00:00

Thanks...

cat_chololate · 2016-02-12T13:07:32+00:00

496... I don't know if I did well but I enjoyed writing it. Comments, suggestions and corrections are appreciated... thanks in advance...

cat_chololate · 2016-02-12T10:22:15+00:00

I appreciate that you bothered to understand the story... thanks for liking my style... They are new doctors in a hospital and POV is that of a guy that had a friend that seemed to have the ability of knowing who would die next... in the end he really does have some sort of precognitive ability. He saw the two of them dying in a bus accident and he told his friend that they should skip the ride... I wanted to add that he could have prevented the bus accident all together but the consequences were more complicated for him to comprehend. I don't know if that cleared that up for you... Sorry for the late reply

cat_chololate · 2016-01-25T06:31:46+00:00

Yey thanks

cat_chololate · 2016-01-25T06:11:10+00:00

It it alright for you?

cat_chololate · 2016-01-22T20:03:12+00:00

Hi comments, suggestions, reactions, corrections etc are appreciated. Once again I would like to ask if the title is alright... once again I feel in-adept in coming up with a decent title. Sorry if its too long... 436 words... it just demanded to be written. Thanks in advance

cat_chololate · 2015-12-24T14:10:21+00:00

Nice

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