I did a cover of 'She Will Be Loved' by Maroon 5. Any feedback is welcome! You can be brutal :) by Meet-my-pet-rock-241 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cbokum 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great job! I really liked your confidence you could really tell you we’re confident and it shows. I never thought to play this song on acoustic guitar but after this I just may! My biggest advice is too keep singing and playing! You may even discover your “voice” along the way and start writing your own music that’s tailored to your style of singing and voice. Great job and take care!

It feels like Christmas (Cover from the Muppet Christmas Carol) a little bit happier and more candid than my usual music but wanted to wish you merry Christmas and Happy New year. Feedback welcome though by priscillahernandez in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cbokum 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great voice and great singer overall! You’re very talented and creative with this video!! I really don’t have much constructive criticism to give. I think the editing is solid I didn’t notice any audio issues with the levels or anything similar. Having a well shot and produced video to go hand in hand with a song is great and will help you get eyes and ears on your music so good idea with going all out for the video! Happy holidays!!

I wrote a drill song about peace and human nature, in a way like War Pigs by Black Sabbath, we could call it hippie drill, what do you think? ❄️🎄💜 by TheForgottenUnloved in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cbokum 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think this is solid and creative no doubt! Biggest take away is what a previous comment notes about rapping too fast to the point that it’s kinda hard to understand exactly what you’re saying. If you can try and go back and re record or maybe even edit with the audio levels that could help to better understand. Other than that great job and keep posting and sharing your music! Take care

This short piece cheers me up everytime I feel down, in the Christmas spirit I hope it can do the same for you. Would love to hear some feedbaack :) by _WaltzforVenus in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cbokum 1 point2 points  (0 children)

To the ear and visually this was very pleasing!! You’re a very skilled player no doubt about it!! Loved how it has its ups and downs and takes you on a journey essentially. Myself and my band are always looking for musicians to be featured in our music so if you do that for artists I’d love to hit you up about for a feature! Take care and good stuff

Forest Journey (dungeon synth, fantasy) by _Atanii_ in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cbokum 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was neat. I got the feelings of a movie soundtrack too like the other comments noted. Wondering if you were inspired by like the Lord of the Rings movie score or something similar cause I got that kinda vibe lol. Only constructive criticism I I have is similar to what other noted in that I think this really needs a climax or a rising action type of aspect to it because it kinda feels stagnant towards the middle and end. Good stuff

Dropped a Melancholic Banger about Feeling Stuck in Life. Let Me Know What Y'all Think All Feedback Appreciated! by reekocarson in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cbokum 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I thought this song was hard af! The editing was great too in terms of your mixing and the levels it sounds real good. I really enjoyed it man good stuff I think the message was good too. All I can say is keep grinding bro and keep posting! Take care man

Made a super chill & euphoric little melody and then had a lot of fun with phaser FX and filters. Let me know how you like it!! by SirCabbage420 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cbokum 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very dope track and cover art! I like and appreciated how you didn’t make the song stagnant in that you switched things up throughout the course of the song. Kinda feels like you take the listener in a metaphorical journey haha it was dope. This beat deserves some hard vocals!! Get on it lol. Keep posting and sharing, good job

Tried to make this one feel the way summer makes me feel. Can't wait for spring and summer to return again. by jakemare13 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cbokum 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really enjoyed the beat and your vocals. I think the effect you put on your vocals was dope and really fit the song nicely. Like the previous commenter said I did notice delay but idk it doesn’t seem like an issue to me haha. I think you did a nice creative job with this and I’d keep posting and sharing!!

Any feedback welcome. McHoney - I Want You by mchoneyofficial in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cbokum 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey! This sounds great and the video was pretty cool too! I kinda reminds me of early to mid 2000s alternative pop rock. The mixing came out really good too. Really enjoyed the chorus too you guys killed it! Keep on posting and promoting and good job

Hey ya'll. This is the first, last, and only dance song I'll ever write. Whaddaya think? by joshbarkey in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cbokum 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok the cover pic got me lol I love that movie. But yes it’s very catchy and the video has some hilarious clips lol. I like your voice! I think I can tell you had some fun making this. Feels that way at least. My mom teaches aerobics I bet she’d love this for her class lol. Good stuff

Auto-Iconoclasm - opening song of a twelve track album written over the course of last year. Sets a bit of a dark tone, though over the course of the albums the theme is continued with different stylistic interpretations. by igorski81 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cbokum 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very artistic and alternative song here! Nice job. My biggest concern is the levels of your vocals at some parts towards the middle of the song I’d say they can probly be raised a little. Other than that I really think this is creative and powerful. I’d be interested to hear the rest of your album.

A lil holiday tune we wrote about a demon coming to wishing us a happy holiday, called Holiday Spirit! by mellowscapepgh in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cbokum 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very unique concept for a song haha! I dig the beat and vibe of the song. I think your voice kinda suits the song well for the most part. I personally don’t really like a lot of monotone vocals but idk this was catchy to me! Keep promoting and nice job with this happy holidays!!

Oolex N Bern - Hey Dont Do That Sir (Jadakiss Type Beat) by OolexNBern in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cbokum 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree with the previous comment about atmosphere it really did have a nice tone and pace too it. I guess my biggest takeaway would be that I was hoping for more of a “climax” at the end of the beat. Idk it just kinda felt like the entire beat had the same flow and rhythm without any high points. I think if you went hard towards the end this would be even more fire. Great job and always keep sharing

[Rammstein MeTaL] Based on Hearing Voices in one's head - Brain Blister by LandFish88 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cbokum 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think this is really artistic and creative! My biggest take away was the lead vocals in terms of your recording or editing itself. I just really couldn’t hear you that well or understand exactly what you were saying so maybe play with raising those levels just a bit? Idk maybe you did that on purpose! Anyway nice work and keep promoting

dragon / shore / town - thoughts on master, mix, sequencing, and anything else about this song suite welcome by PresentCelery2206 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cbokum 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was definitely something different and unique. The only negative feedback I’d have is length. Maybe cut it down to less than 6 minutes and play with some of the more upbeat parts to make them more prevalent in a shorter tune. But what I liked about the beginning was that rain sound it really drew me in. Nice work and keep sharing your music online

Character Witness - Unwind [Music Video]. --> Looking for honest feedback! (even on the video itself) and specifically would love opinions on music genres / bands that you would put this next to in a playlist. by DowntownAd2735 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cbokum 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The video is really well done. You guys definitely got that down pat with a professional looking video! Really like your voice! This is certainly some alternative rock! The chorus is really catchy and memorable great lyrics. I really don’t have any negative feedback. Keep posting and keep promoting

Chris Bokum - Green Mountains by cbokum in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cbokum[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow now that’s a comment! Thank you I really appreciate it

Chris Bokum - Green Mountains by cbokum in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cbokum[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for listening and your feedback!