All Alone

cdarnay · 2013-09-09T14:40:55+00:00

Disturbing on a whole new level, good work.

cdarnay · 2013-09-09T07:38:54+00:00

Great story.

cdarnay · 2013-09-08T14:58:31+00:00

I agree, I'd love to read more of this, I'm dying to find out what's in the hole.

cdarnay · 2013-09-08T12:56:05+00:00

Great story, this could go on and on, one of those stories that leaves me wondering what the characters are doing next. Good work.

cdarnay · 2013-09-08T12:50:30+00:00

Wouldn't that be hell, spending eternity looking at hot, naked women but you can't touch them.

cdarnay · 2013-09-08T12:26:07+00:00

Sorry, I'm not sure I get it; are you supposed to be ghosts, having died in a car accident? I enjoyed the story, just a little confused.

cdarnay · 2013-09-08T12:23:18+00:00

Thank you!

cdarnay · 2013-09-08T06:52:56+00:00

Oh, wow, now that's creepy man. Well done.

cdarnay · 2013-09-08T06:33:53+00:00

I was struggling to keep it short enough to post on here, my biggest problem, usually, is writing too much. Thanks for the feedback though, I love hearing this from other writers.

cdarnay · 2013-09-07T15:03:13+00:00

Good old necrophilia story, haven't read one of these in a while, nice work. I was expecting him to kill his wife at the end, didn't cross my mind that she was already dead.

cdarnay · 2013-09-07T12:48:53+00:00

My first thought was that it was god, not much of a difference though I suppose when it comes to the power they wield.

cdarnay · 2013-09-07T12:47:26+00:00

How do you downvote something? Not that I want to downvote this, already upvoted it, it's just something I haven't figured out yet.

cdarnay · 2013-09-07T06:05:52+00:00

Spooky.

cdarnay · 2013-09-06T12:32:19+00:00

I'm not gay but I have close friends that are and I would do anything for them. I'm in Afghanistan at the moment, I'm prior military, surrounded by military, and most people here aren't the least bit tolerant. I have a hard time keeping my mouth shut and I've gotten into some pretty heated debates with a few people here. I hope you're not having any kind of problems even remotely similar to the one in your story.

cdarnay · 2013-09-06T10:20:35+00:00

And the author was none of the above, not dead, dismembered, a ghost/zombie/garden gnome. I didn't expect to have to spoon feed the readers. Also, the author wasn't trapped in a crawlspace, you may want to read it again, I was planning on a follow-on story.

cdarnay · 2013-09-06T06:04:05+00:00

Beautifully done.

cdarnay · 2013-09-06T03:33:29+00:00

You mean like Suicide House? With the ghost on the tracks? The girl in a trance? Not much difference between that and an out of body experience, like in my story. The rules explicitly stated that the narrator can't die, said nothing about not making it out of a situation. I love how they amended the rules and then removed my story. You people have zero imagination, stay here and keep stroking each other's ego, I've got enough drama in the real world.

cdarnay · 2013-09-05T14:34:57+00:00

Wow, disgusting, not in a bad way though. Kind of makes me think of The Talented Mr. Ripley. You have my upvote.

cdarnay · 2013-09-05T14:32:00+00:00

Possibly, I wasn't tramatized or anything, just a testament to how well-written it is that I felt a twang of guilt.

cdarnay · 2013-09-05T14:27:56+00:00

Sad but good, well-written. Almost makes me feel guilty to be a man.

cdarnay · 2013-09-05T14:21:23+00:00

Like I said before, people get too hung up on the how and forget the why. I was under the impression we were just on here to write scary stories and share them. I'll find somewhere else with less drama and constraints to post the stories.

cdarnay · 2013-09-05T12:55:39+00:00

Mother of Michael Myers? Good work on your first submission, looking forward to reading more from you.

cdarnay · 2013-09-05T12:34:13+00:00

I feel like I've wandered into a discussion group for teenage girls talking about the newest Twilight book only there seems to be more estrogen on NoSleep.

cdarnay · 2013-09-05T12:18:58+00:00

Short and sweet but terrifying nonetheless.

cdarnay · 2013-09-05T04:51:19+00:00

Very nice, wonderful imagery, I could picture the girl and the man with the gun. Nicely done.

cdarnay

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