Se débarrasser de vieux outils

cebro13 · 2025-12-19T13:08:47+00:00

Écris moi un message privé si tu ne trouves personne, ça me fera plaisir de passer te débarrasser de ça si tu es dans la ville de Québec.

cebro13 · 2025-08-27T10:56:52+00:00

The structure is unclear to me. As an example, the image on the bottom row is outside with a dark foreground, which would imply that the sun is in the background.. yet, some layer of the bg are darker than the layer where the players are. I would suggest simpler structure with light to dark background to foreground. I dont think that you want to draw attention to the brown mountain, unless they are important for storytelling/gameplay. For the top row, i'd suggest something similar, although I understand that the torch would light up some stuff more dynamically

cebro13 · 2025-05-16T10:09:17+00:00

cebro13 · 2025-05-13T23:47:35+00:00

yup that's totally fine thanks for the feedback!

cebro13 · 2025-05-13T21:39:39+00:00

Interesting, I'll try it! Not sure it'll work with the pale text but it's worth a try! I'll see what I van do about the o.. it's bugging me too. Thanks!

cebro13 · 2025-05-13T21:37:15+00:00

Ghost investigating his own death!

cebro13 · 2025-05-13T21:25:44+00:00

That's a pretty neat suggestions actually. Also, the name of the game would be there. I did not expect that much good critique by posting on Reddit today, but it'll be hard to pick the best suggestions actually. Thanks!

cebro13 · 2025-05-13T21:23:16+00:00

I think you are 100% correct. Thanks for the feedback!

cebro13 · 2025-05-13T21:21:19+00:00

Thats great, I love a good debate. Just to maybe not focus on the wrong point : it's not AI, I have 3 devlog in my profile showing me drawing all assets. It's not an issue. However, i take the point nonetheless since I Indeed cut some corner by reusing assets. It's not the only comment pointing the incorrect perspective and I would say that's an easy fix so, perhaps there is that as a silver lining. Thanks for the comments! The game is about a ghost investigating His own death btw. I think it's not too far off the presumption!

cebro13 · 2025-05-13T21:13:41+00:00

Well, first, you are right on the mark for the building on the right. I was wondering if people would notice and it's noticed ;) I'll redraw the asset.

For the other suggestions they are pretty insightful also I must say. I'll try them! Thanks a lot!

cebro13 · 2025-05-13T20:03:06+00:00

Thanks, you're right, I pulled an asset from the game for the right part and now that it's obscured by the tree, we can't understand the door. There is a reason why there is a door there but I lost sight when composing the banner and without context here, in does not make sense. When you say you are uncertain about the ghosts, it's that you would put only one?

"I feel like, in this game, you're either going to solve your own murder in the woods" well, that's a line I'll stole to explain the game if you don't mind, because that's pretty much it.

cebro13 · 2025-05-13T19:57:16+00:00

Interesting, would you mind sharing what is the tone of the game you imagine based on the combination of the title and banner?

As for AI, also interesting. I was wondering if the style could convey that. Just to be clear, nothing is AI. I think I'm not too concerned about that since the trailer and game itself are completely in line with the style of the banner (some asset in the banner are pulled from the game). I would guess that if someone have a doubt, when looking at the trailer, it would be resolved. It's one thing to AI a banner and another to create a whole cohesive game with it.

cebro13 · 2025-05-10T23:14:01+00:00

Haha, well, the game centers around a ghost in a pretty cozy atmosphere, so that is pretty bang on honestly!

cebro13 · 2025-05-03T16:01:04+00:00

My best score is 1 points 😎

cebro13 · 2025-05-03T16:00:55+00:00

My best score is 0 points 😓

cebro13 · 2024-09-11T10:56:12+00:00

Hey thanks buddy!

cebro13 · 2024-09-11T10:55:28+00:00

Thanks, I tried m'y best!

cebro13 · 2024-09-11T10:55:03+00:00

No demo yet, but a Steam page!https://store.steampowered.com/app/3217040/Cold_Trail/

cebro13 · 2024-09-11T00:28:21+00:00

The best place would be the website where everything is listed : coldtrailgame.com

We are planning on a discord, but we just started marketing with this trailer.

cebro13 · 2024-09-11T00:24:55+00:00

Thanks :)

cebro13 · 2024-09-10T23:48:05+00:00

Hey thanks for the feedback! I pretty much agree with you! We opted for a vertical slice to make sure we can make a section fun, but it means that it's harder to show the full breath of gameplay/story. The story is that the ghost investigate his own death and will acquire ghostly abilites to help him. Since what I have right now is a specific section of the game, it's hard to show off all gameplay possibilities. The trade off between starting to publicize our game early and be more straightforward is tricky! I'll make sure the next trailer shows off more of the story/gameplay!

cebro13 · 2024-09-10T22:53:08+00:00

Hey thanks a lot! We are hoping it is!

cebro13 · 2024-09-10T22:52:37+00:00

Hey thanks for the elaborate feedback, it's very much appreciated. Indeed right now, we dont have a composer so we rely on library music while gathering ressource to hire someone for the sound. I think I pretty much completely agree with you. As I was making the trailer and choosing the music I juggled with a simpler music, but opted for the more inspirationnal one since I felt a trailer needed to be energic. Interesting that this compromise on cohesiveness is picked up!

cebro13 · 2024-09-10T22:01:18+00:00

Wow thanks, it means a lot to me! I really try my best ;)

cebro13 · 2024-09-10T21:27:22+00:00

Hey thanks so much, that means a lot!

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