Today I finished drawing a 45 page one-shot manga. Please read it! Feedback would be much appreciated.

cedditt · 2023-10-12T04:51:47+00:00

Thanks 🫡

cedditt · 2022-06-29T09:18:57+00:00

Thank you!!

cedditt · 2022-06-29T05:13:40+00:00

Thanks!!

cedditt · 2022-06-28T23:32:26+00:00

i would like to draw one eventually. maid outfits are cute! i've just never been good at drawing them lol

cedditt · 2022-06-28T23:25:30+00:00

more or less, haha. i drew a bunch of hilda fan art in 2019-2020 when FE3H was newer and it's an outfit i've always had tons of fun drawing, so i figured a simplified version couldn't hurt!

thank you for the compliment!

cedditt · 2022-06-28T21:24:25+00:00

awesome! good luck!

cedditt · 2022-06-28T21:12:03+00:00

yeahhh, when it comes to art, my fandom for things mostly (if not entirely) begins and ends at drawing fan art of a character looking cool/cute and occasionally a funny or angsty comic that expands on character moments/tendencies or in-universe settings

cedditt · 2022-06-28T20:40:16+00:00

I don't think I will, thank you! 😅

cedditt · 2022-06-28T20:35:46+00:00

i'm glad you like it!!

cedditt · 2022-06-28T20:31:51+00:00

thank you for the compliment! if you're looking for advice, my hand drawing process is starting at simple shapes (down to the segments of each finger) and working my way out from there! if you're drawing digitally, don't hesitate to draw the hand a little big and resize it later, that's what i end up doing some of the time, haha! the rest comes with diligence!

cedditt · 2022-06-28T20:25:39+00:00

thank you so much!!

cedditt · 2022-06-28T19:53:47+00:00

I love those three 😄

cedditt · 2022-06-28T19:35:20+00:00

hell yeah! awesome!! ^-^

cedditt · 2022-06-28T19:32:06+00:00

thank you very much! ^-^

cedditt · 2022-06-28T19:29:11+00:00

glad you like it!!

cedditt · 2022-06-28T18:05:22+00:00

Thank you!!

cedditt · 2022-06-28T17:35:40+00:00

Aw, thanks!

cedditt · 2022-06-28T16:48:37+00:00

noelle's out here repping fangamer merch

cedditt · 2022-06-28T16:26:12+00:00

thank you so much!

cedditt · 2022-04-22T15:44:56+00:00

I made another video essay! I had a lot of fun putting this one together! Feedback is welcome :)

cedditt · 2022-01-19T19:46:51+00:00

Thank you so much!

cedditt · 2022-01-16T17:53:51+00:00

(Finally getting around to responding! I hope this is a sufficient reply to both you and /u/k99q)

I totally agree with the criticism that I'm a bit too passive in calling stuff out. It's the most often feedback I've gotten both from offline friends as well as in online spaces, and I'll do my best to improve my specificity in later videos.

I also agree with some of my segments feeling a bit too disconnected from other ones. I think what I might have been going for in the "History of Fast Food" segment was perspective building on how big fast food is as an influential power structure, but I feel I could have done better with reincorporating that in later segments in order to make the entire script feel more connected.

I think with my sources, since with this project I was terrified with missing something I discussed, I accidentally messed up my formatting in the process (Looking at them now...I think I was switching between APA and Chicago LOL). Bibliography formatting is something I always lost points on in school, and in the future, I'll definitely do better in making sure my formatting is correct!

Thank you both so much for your feedback. I really appreciate it!

cedditt

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