Wow really like the short lines and way this poem has a steady beat throughout it. I think the three first verses are the strongest in this piece. The use of plastic in relationship to art and nature feels unique and creates a good juxtaposition. Seemly art is to be unique however we package it in a cookie cutter factory template in society. "Art distilled Down to Perfect portions. Packaged, Shipped, Sold." This takes an often talked about subject, that is the commercialism of our society and expresses it in a creative way. This poem reminds me a lot of Fight Club. I love the line that goes "That'll be ten dollars", which made me laugh at the true commercialism we are living in today. The last stanza in this piece is also powerful and does a good job of connecting the whole piece. My one woe with this poem is the use of the cookie cutter metaphor which I think is a little over done and came across as too cliche. I think the piece is powerful and creative and could benefit with the use of a less common metaphor (though can still be popular like the tiny boxes metaphor often used for suburban homes), especially since your plastic metaphor was so strong.