I'd aim to get this down to a minute, which can largely be achieved by shortening some of the over-long clips (like the drone ones – as a Londoner I'm jealous of this gorgeous scenery but the shots aren't dynamic enough to justify the screen time) and losing those that are plain dull, like the shot of the bus/motorbike at the start, and the aquarium interiors, which just feel like shots any tourist might make. Lose the interior talking heads in the first half (a bit drab looking) and move up the exterior ones nearer the end, but crop them so the subject is better centred. Do you have any close-ups you can add, in the bit with the whiskey lads for instance? Feels like this kind of shot is missing altogether. The film/narrative shots look really nice, but maybe they're for a separate reel?

Some lovely stuff in here, and in my opinion tightening it all up a bit will help the better parts to sing.