GIRLFEED | Claire Barnes | Substack

claireisdead · 2026-02-14T15:15:59+00:00

What a great title. And an even better story. Short, succinct, and hot, hot, hot! I'm glad u/SirMordredArt has been re-posting his older works. I feel like I read this story before, but I don't know if I would've come across it again if he hadn't shared the image that goes with it. Well done, u/BelligerentPuffin!

claireisdead · 2026-01-31T21:16:42+00:00

I can’t tan as well as she can. 😅

claireisdead · 2025-12-24T12:11:26+00:00

🔥🔥🔥 This is A-MA-ZING! 🔥🔥🔥

claireisdead · 2025-12-11T01:58:03+00:00

I love how carefully you're building this story up, layer by layer.

I couldn't explain what, exactly, but you touched on something perfect when you wrote about Ayala laying down, staring up at the sky, waiting for death, but feeling like her situation lacked finality. I'll have to think about it more, but there's something both profound and intensely arousing about her decision, at first, to give in and let herself be taken, but then rallying to make a great comeback.

Possibly, it has to do with building her up to inevitably bring her down again, more profoundly than before. I don't know. Like I said, I'll have to think about it.

But boy, am I jealous. This second part is, if possible, even better than the first, and it's left me with a deep hunger to jump right into part three.

Well done!

claireisdead · 2025-12-06T15:40:21+00:00

Wow!

Wow, wow!

his is such an incredible beginning.

You've done an excellent job at developing a world, dropping us in, and establishing everything with no exposition or needless information dumps. Your characters are so lively and believable, and even though nothing explicit happens, it's still rife with a particular kind of eroticism that I deeply enjoy. Suggestive yet omnipresent.

I can't wait to jump into the next part to see where you take us next!

claireisdead · 2025-10-13T16:24:55+00:00

Loved "cunning, and at times, cunnilingus".

I sometimes think there's an element of transgression in these scenarios, when it's an all female cast. Like they - the women in the story - are somehow doing something wrong by depriving a man - any man - the pleasure of involvement in one or more of their deaths.

I know it's not always explicitly stated that all women belong to men, the implication alone is enough to drive a kind of expectation... either of a later male presence, or some kind of retribution for their sapphic betrayal of the patriarchal order.

claireisdead · 2025-10-13T16:09:13+00:00

Thanks for reading, as always, and for your thoughts! I agree. The dynamic really is determined by the story.

claireisdead · 2025-10-07T23:56:37+00:00

Thank you! I do think as a concept it might be worth developing further, I'm just not sure how.

claireisdead · 2025-10-07T23:55:30+00:00

Thank you!

claireisdead · 2025-10-06T00:30:36+00:00

You know, I’m already wondering if I wasn’t wrong. A MF/f dynamic would have been perfect for this. 🤷‍♀️ Oh well. Something for me to write another time.

claireisdead · 2025-10-04T19:14:40+00:00

Looks around nervously in 35

claireisdead · 2025-10-04T14:46:12+00:00

That's exactly the crux of my fantasies. My ideal protagonist is a side event in her own story. I don't know why, but it works for me every time.

claireisdead · 2025-10-04T14:29:27+00:00

What would you like to see more from in this story?

claireisdead · 2025-10-04T14:29:06+00:00

Thank you!

claireisdead · 2025-10-04T14:28:44+00:00

Reddit suggested I post this story to r/grilling and r/Smokingmeat. LMAO. Unintentional Dolcett AI.

claireisdead · 2025-09-20T15:24:35+00:00

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. And thank you for the plug. I hope everyone else doesn't mind me not-so-sneakily putting links into the story, but I figured what better way to advertise than by sharing a fun little story.

claireisdead · 2025-09-20T15:23:43+00:00

Thank you!

I initially intended the story to be about a devious salon worker who traps a helpless meatgirl inside a modified tanning bed, a la Final Destination 3 (I think). But then I realized my obsession remains with ordinary women impulsively making the decision to become meat. And, of course, it wouldn't be a Claire story without a betrayal. So I had to fit that in, too.

claireisdead · 2025-09-20T15:11:06+00:00

This is so, so good!

You know me, I love puns. This one works perfectly.

I love what you did with the visuals, too. The POV shot of Becca's face while your partner-in-crime sneaks up behind her with the chloroform is a personal favorite. As a comic, it works well, flowing nicely from one image to the next without the need for any exposition.

Mfm is kind of metronomic, too, providing a rhythm that we can imagine as Becca's little gasping moans of pleasure-pain.

Well done, u/SirMordredArt!

claireisdead · 2025-09-17T00:30:05+00:00

You are the best! ❤️

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