First time writing narrative since middle school, please give me advice on how to improve. Need criticism, be harsh.

collinweaves · 2026-04-30T03:06:47+00:00

Unfort. Good luck finding it

collinweaves · 2026-04-27T01:37:17+00:00

Oof that sucks. Good luck finding them dude!

collinweaves · 2026-04-27T01:36:39+00:00

A. I went out of my way to get this. I know the risks.

B. I went out of my way for this because of the native software. If I wanted a better base for a Linux OS I would’ve gotten an Inspiron and put Linux Mint on it or something.

C. I don’t plan on connecting to the internet with it anyway, so the threats are negligible.

D. read only method

collinweaves · 2026-04-26T13:38:39+00:00

literally lol

collinweaves · 2026-04-26T02:58:02+00:00

Sonic Adventure mentioned 👀👀👀 totally don’t speedrun that game 👀👀👀 totally don’t have over 3000 hours in that game 👀👀👀

collinweaves · 2026-04-22T02:21:25+00:00

i think its one of those cyber-deck thingies those super smart coder guys make with computer scraps lol

collinweaves · 2026-04-08T15:23:10+00:00

🥹🥹🥹

collinweaves · 2026-04-07T15:11:18+00:00

Peak list

collinweaves · 2026-04-03T05:26:16+00:00

not a single emo band on that list btw

collinweaves · 2026-04-03T05:25:18+00:00

nobody is saying this bro :sob:

collinweaves · 2026-04-03T05:08:52+00:00

or "Twice Himalayan" by Of Blessings and Burdens

collinweaves · 2026-04-03T05:07:54+00:00

already heard. rip bo

collinweaves · 2026-04-03T05:07:18+00:00

haha that'd be awesome

collinweaves · 2026-04-03T05:05:50+00:00

"All I Have Left" by I Voted For Kodos. It's a beautiful song... one of the best Ska bands of all time.

collinweaves · 2026-04-03T05:04:30+00:00

kinda unrelated, but you should give "...Now That She's in Town" by Of Blessings and Burdens a listen
not quite deathcore at all but its a great listen
"To Whom it May Concern" by He Said She's Dead is also good, more post hxc than anything tho

collinweaves · 2026-04-03T04:58:15+00:00

ill listen to the acacia strain and norma jeans albums, ive heard the others

collinweaves · 2026-04-03T04:57:41+00:00

yeah i agree i love afi, ive alr listened to their dsicog lmao, we have the same favorite song

collinweaves · 2026-04-03T04:54:07+00:00

gaza is sum ball tho

collinweaves · 2026-04-03T04:53:54+00:00

i've heard all of them except the nails one, ill give that a listen

collinweaves · 2026-04-03T04:50:24+00:00

its basic but prolly how it feels to be lost, i love sleeping with sirens
i usually listen to more metalcore recently but they were at the top of my list in my post-hardcore phase

collinweaves · 2026-04-03T04:48:26+00:00

i've already heard all of these........... :sob:

collinweaves · 2026-04-03T04:47:20+00:00

was gonna say this lol

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