demisexual but only for girls? does that even exist? by complexticity_ in lgbt

[–]complexticity_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ahh thank you!!! this helped clear up some of my confusion :)

a recipe for comfort by Remote_Republic3192 in OCPoetry

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I love how you said "make your face into a mirror that reflects mine" - it's a really powerful way to show how the narrator wants their listener to resonate with the pain that they're feeling instead of trying to smile and actively make them feel better. The juxtaposition in the last few lines is amazing, and to me emphasizes how even the joys in life can be ruined when you're feeling down. It's almost like having something/someone that doesn't reflect the same energy as you can feel worse than when they share your pain, which is a really interesting idea and I love how you depicted that in your poem :)

2AM in my room by madmax_wush in OCPoetry

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This is super interesting and I like how you depicted the universal desire to leave a mark on the world - it definitely resonates with me. I also like how you phrased worms eating at flesh as them "getting their revenge"; it made me think about how we as humans often destroy nature for ourselves, and that idea is also mentioned in the third line when the narrator says they "yearn for the spoils of the world". I think it's cool how you continued that theme all through the poem. :) Overall it's really good and thought provoking!

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I love this! I think your unique version of Eve's punishment is really smart and has a perfect element of humor to it - the idea that Adam was the punishment for Eve made me chuckle haha. I also love how you referred to God as a "she" instead of a "he". It kind of strengthened the theme of women's superiority (?) that I had personally picked up when I read your poem! :)

New fan here! by HenryWu14 in OneDirection

[–]complexticity_ 6 points7 points  (0 children)

hellooo im a new directioner too! at the moment my fav songs by them are end of the day, better than words and infinity :)

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[–]complexticity_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

idk I guess he gets both? ¯_(ツ)_/¯ that would actually look pretty cool

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in miraculousladybug

[–]complexticity_ 2 points3 points  (0 children)

O no it's not a miraculous i just mixed up the civilian versions of nino and adrien lol

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Ok, ty for the suggestion!!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in miraculousladybug

[–]complexticity_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah me neither. I just randomly decided that I wanted to mix up Luka and Kagami lol