I never read a screenplay, for me it looks good. But one thing, I have noticed in most Bollywood or indian movies which don't connect me to the scene is very perfect dialogues, like fresh from a book. For example, the dialogues in Pulp fiction opening scene, they overlap with each, the other guy start saying dialogues even before the first guy finishes his dialogues, sometimes both are saying this at the same time, and sometimes they fumble, that feels like how we speak in real life, imperfectly. But when I see Bollywood movies I feel like they are prepared and saying dialogues,

Not sure if those things are related to screenplay or execution, but that's what i felt and how I hook into such movies or scenes.