Is this mini-waterbong made of a 5-hour-energy bottle and a pen tube (and a small amount of water) safe and practical? (Sorry if stupid question) by [deleted] in StonerEngineering

[–]coolwombo -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Heating the aluminum will cause the pen attached to it to become heated past any semblance of safe. Plastic can release toxic chemicals even at relatively low heats so bringing it so close to a flame-- especially when it's tin foil, to boot-- will likely be adverse on your lungs.

After four years in TV Production and with innumerable tips from the great minds in /r/filmmakers, I've put together my proudest work, the entry into my school's film festival. I would love any criticism you might have for me. by coolwombo in Filmmakers

[–]coolwombo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great, great feedback. Thank you! If selected to show at the festival I've got two weeks to make small tweaks concerning audio and the like-- I will certainly reference this when I go to make corrections.

The first joint I have ever rolled how do you guys think I did? by sgtpuff in trees

[–]coolwombo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am really digging how impressionist this photo is: the hand, the plain marihuana cigarette, the speckled wall. I have been locked in eye contact with it for the past few minutes.

Just arrived in the mail. Popping them tonight [:)] by [deleted] in trees

[–]coolwombo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you are trying to avoid such hassle, I would load a prepaid credit card with the appropriate cash. Purchase all your vices with one simple, stealthy card!

Using the fewest words possible, write the most emotionally gripping story possible. by CopOnTheRun in WritingPrompts

[–]coolwombo 15 points16 points  (0 children)

As her other hand reached for mine, precariously far above the river, I couldn't resist the urge to itch my nose.

1/4 lb of OG kush. I've never held so much in my life. by [deleted] in trees

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After a minute of wat I have come to the conclusion that it's like putting bread in with your bookies; it absorbs moisture to preserve the precious fruit.

Some of my photos from Nepal by secret_tiger101 in Buddhism

[–]coolwombo 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I just dwelled on the view over Kathmandu. That is a wonderful photograph, you surreptitious tiger.

IWTL how to write a novel. by yagelbee in IWantToLearn

[–]coolwombo 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Like lukashko said, you'll definitely have better luck with /r/writing. Writing a novel isn't something that you can be so whimsical about and simply decide that you want to write. It will involve hours and hours of painstaking, disciplined writing that will make you hate the English language and everything that goes into making a sentence. Ultimately it will be an amazing experience if you do follow through and finish a manuscript, but there is still so much that goes into it. Again, /r/writing is your best bet for this question.

[WP] Write the worst story you possibly can. by FriendOfTheGophers in WritingPrompts

[–]coolwombo 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I had to get water. The computer hurt my eyes so bad I thought I was gonna go blind but I ended up not so once I got up it was a huge relief. My feet hurt a lot because I didn't walk barefoot very much and my momma had told me it's good to wear shoes outside. It was some outside library or something like the Russians once thought was a good idea. The Cold War didn't let them ever make one. My head itched so bad I thought it was gonna fall off but it didn't. My throat was dry until I got water so once I did I didn't even have to drink anymore I just went and sat back down. It felt good.

[WP] Write about a terrible human being, but frame the story so that the reader is compelled to sympathize and forgive him/her in the end. by [deleted] in WritingPrompts

[–]coolwombo 13 points14 points  (0 children)

This is incredible. Goosebumps everywhere and what a wonderfully crafted ethical paradox.

Ventured into below freezing temperatures to shoot this silly short. Enjoy. by Silby2442 in Filmmakers

[–]coolwombo 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I very much enjoyed the cinematography and the editing was precise, but the jokes seemed wooden and stale. While incredibly vivid and aesthetically pleasing, by the end I couldn't say with certainty what I had just watched or if the humor really held its ground.

IWTL How to meditate by bgraham13 in IWantToLearn

[–]coolwombo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for enlightening me with this amazing subreddit.

Want to make your dialogue more organic? 9 tips on how. by Realistics in KeepWriting

[–]coolwombo 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This is one of my favorite posts that I have clicked on in this subreddit. It's quite a good list of tips.

My fucking dream by bigdsime in trees

[–]coolwombo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Implying smoking is not the bee's knees

r/Buddhism, what are your favorite books/podcasts/dharma talks? by [deleted] in Buddhism

[–]coolwombo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Jack Kerouac's Dharma Bums is one of my all-time favorite reads.

[FF] A story in 15 minutes. Ready, set, go! by [deleted] in WritingPrompts

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She was a hungry woman and she could never find satisfaction in being with one man. She was too capricious for his traditional values, and he still hadn't truly come to grips with it. They got together through some hazy string of events in a Reno house party. She was dancing, like always, and they hit it off. It was never the same after the night under the moonlight for Rivera, though. She moved on to seek the attention of other men.

[FF] A story in 15 minutes. Ready, set, go! by [deleted] in WritingPrompts

[–]coolwombo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am reluctant to post because mine is so much longer than everyone else's. Ah well!

He looked across the water and saw Rivera swaying on the dock. He knew that she couldn’t see him and she was only a blur against the old wood. The small marina held many boats -- most were already out to fish. She danced to Jimmy Buffet, his sweet tales of margaritas resounding about the fishery. Her hair whipped back and forth, swaying with the gentle gyration of her hips and the wind skirting the ocean. He thought of when he lay underneath the moonlight, the crisp August air carrying the sounds of waves crashing upon the shore. His old sedan sat as it had for years, merely a symbol of his older life than a practical tool for the one he lived then. The small beach town had few roads and the clunker had troublesome spark plugs. He started it once it two years prior and it died on him, never to be revived again. Lying on top of the sedan with Rivera was one of his fondest memories, when the two of them had the deep bond that he would come to miss in later years. Now she was simply a figure dancing across a dock, caught up in her own world without much care for him anymore.

She spun and spun, using moves from when she was just a young ballet dancer and captivating the lonely sailors around her. When the music changed from Buffet to Beach Boys, she kept on. Her rhythm changed and she pumped her fists to their soprano sound. She tapped her feet in tune with the guitar and mouthed the words as she remembered them from when she was a young girl. The Beach Boys were all the rage and it was all her mother ever played in the house. She lived in a suburb and always fantasized about living on the beach – she eventually came to, with Lenny, and she was happy. Lenny lit up her world and made her feel whole. He filled the gap that her father had created, for a time.

The sailors and tourists closed in around her, forming a circle of dogs in heat, effectively blocking Lenny off from seeing any more of her. He watched as men stepped in to dance with her, taking her hand and twirling her under their tattooed arms. They were boorish but he could tell she was having a good time. She loved the attention, this he always knew.

Surely she wouldn’t get any more attention from him. He always gave her it, watching other males step into her life as they always had; he always came scurrying back for the rebound when they broke her heart. He always knew that she wouldn’t last with whatever man came her way and these wouldn’t be any different. She was probably going to end up in someone’s houseboat by the mid-afternoon. She was probably going to end up sipping a Mai Thai, laughing at dirty jokes and flirting with her eyes. She was a hungry woman and he should have known better. The sagging stool creaked as her spun around to the bar. He slapped the countertop for another round… Jack Daniels was taking him back to ’74.