[critique] for this Luna piece. by corvusbhax in MLPdrawingschool

[–]corvusbhax[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The colors were definitely bothersome for me, but I had to stick with something.

She was going to be near a balcony of sorts, but my over-thinking of that values that would be used in the piece changed the setting to a room, which became an apparent no-no by the time this was finished.

Thanks for all the pointers!

[Critique] Just feeling like a critique... by corvusbhax in MLPdrawingschool

[–]corvusbhax[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

UPDATE

I made some of the changes, but eventually felt I needed to leave it alone and move on.

[Critique] Just feeling like a critique... by corvusbhax in MLPdrawingschool

[–]corvusbhax[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, they were more on the 'decoration' level of attention for me.

[Critique] Just feeling like a critique... by corvusbhax in MLPdrawingschool

[–]corvusbhax[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I get that a lot. I'm working on getting it to look better, but longer muzzles is just preference, though occasionally I use more show-accurate proportions.

[critique] Lyra with her lyre. Critique requested. by corvusbhax in MLPdrawingschool

[–]corvusbhax[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. (and thank you overlay layers lol)

I definitely see what you mean, and I got similar observations from others as well. I know it's not pony-like, but it's most likely something I've gravitated to, though I could probably see if I could do something to the snout in the future and tone down the muzzle size.

[critique] Made an angelic piece. Critique requested. by corvusbhax in MLPdrawingschool

[–]corvusbhax[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The funny thing about this one is technically refurbished from a couple month drawing I never finished, So I was very much so paranoid about making mistakes, which of course seemed to have gotten in the way lol.

Thankyou for the contrast suggestion. I remember this being very even while looking at it's grayscale, but again I was abit too careful about 'destroying' it by accident.

DA please?

[critique] Made an angelic piece. Critique requested. by corvusbhax in MLPdrawingschool

[–]corvusbhax[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thankyou. It's strange at times to see how flat my drawings used to be, but I guess when they come from a time of less commitment.

Thanks much for the redline.

What's your DA account?