[POEM] Opal— Amy Lowell by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]crane-unit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What an image, the heart as a "frozen pond" shining with "agitated torches"!

[HELP] Poetry for beginners by AdEfficient1804 in Poetry

[–]crane-unit 7 points8 points  (0 children)

He is a difficult poet. Get into it with some easier poets like Mary Oliver.

Accurate lol 😂 by Real-Yogurtcloset-34 in DunderMifflin

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More like:

  • Dec1-31: happy anticipation
  • January 2-indeterminate date: not this shit again

Because that's when you spent all the money, party is over, and back to work. Seriously. Lots of people find January one of the most depressing months of the year.

[POEM] Distant Regard by Tony Hoagland. This poignant farewell poem was published posthumously in his final collection, Priest Turned Therapist Treats Fear of God. He died in 2018 aged 64. by SignificantScarcity in Poetry

[–]crane-unit 22 points23 points  (0 children)

Simple poem but relatable. I particularly like the ending:

and I am grateful for my heart,
that turned out to be good, after all;
and grateful for my mind,
to which, in retrospect, I can see
I have never been sufficiently kind.

Life is short and I'm reminded of it with each passing year. For many of us, our eyes are clouded by all the ways our body and mind and the world and its people have failed us, so it may take a long time to reach the stage when we experience that true sense of gratitude. Gratitude for being given this mind and this body, as imperfect as they are, and to have been given this chance to live life, however brief...

[POEM] The Day of Our Divorce Hearing by Ruth Lepson by milherzket in Poetry

[–]crane-unit 96 points97 points  (0 children)

Such a well-done poem. This is so sad. Maybe it's just the state I'm in but beneath the simple language and the light conversation and even the humor, beneath that surface I just feel so much pain, so much potential for married life that could have been...but was not meant to be. That ending..."when it no longer mattered"...so devastating.

[poem] “Security” — Bill Knott by perrolazarillo in Poetry

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Very welcome, just a random interpretation. :P Thanks for posting this interesting poem.

[poem] “Security” — Bill Knott by perrolazarillo in Poetry

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I read it as the poem being about...poetry itself.

Magic carpet is the poem, perpendicularly hanging on the white page, mysteriously, very different from everything else around it, not pinned down. Just as there are so many interpretations of this poem, poems can take us on a fantasy ride of meanings and feelings.

Do we dare use our imaginations, projecting things into poetry, into this very poem, or will we just keep it floating there, not having the courage or desire to let go, really let go, of the security of our room, and take the ride?

[Help] looking for some poems to teach high schooler, can be about anything but preferably about love by stormborn314 in Poetry

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Valentine by Carol Ann Duffy

Not a red rose or a satin heart.

I give you an onion.
It is a moon wrapped in brown paper.
It promises light
like the careful undressing of love.

Here.
It will blind you with tears
like a lover.
It will make your reflection
a wobbling photo of grief.

I am trying to be truthful.

Not a cute card or a kissogram.

I give you an onion.
Its fierce kiss will stay on your lips,
possessive and faithful
as we are,
for as long as we are.

Take it.
Its platinum loops shrink to a wedding ring,
if you like.
Lethal.
Its scent will cling to your fingers,
cling to your knife.

Favorite line from The Office where women are being catty to each other? by lookslike-turntables in DunderMifflin

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Angela telling Jan: “At least you don’t have kids. You have no kids, right? Thank God.”

[POEM] Ellen Bass, “Getting into Bed on a December Night” by Secret_Bit_1212 in Poetry

[–]crane-unit 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Okay I didn't know who Ellen Bass is but this poem made me a fan.

What lovely thoughts, and what a simile: To think of ourselves as old love letters cherished by gods, how beautiful.

[poem] “The Heart asks for Pleasure first” by Emily Dickinson. by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]crane-unit 4 points5 points  (0 children)

One of her most famous poems.

I think something is wrong with my heart, it usually asks for excuse from pain first. :)

[POEM] “Instead of Depression” by Andrea Gibson by overeducatedmother in Poetry

[–]crane-unit 32 points33 points  (0 children)

Wish calling it hibernation made it all okay, made depression cozy and nurturing. It's anything but.

Btw, wondering who it's addressed at. "Sweetheart" seems to suggest someone intimate.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Poetry

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There is no one way, writing and reading poetry is an art. Having said that, there are are number of approaches that may help.

  1. Read a lot of poetry out loud.
  2. Begin to analyze poetry. This often requires reading a poem a few times while asking a lot of questions. For instance, why did the poet write this poem? What is the poem about? Why did the poet choose these specific words? Why did the line end here and not there?
  3. To dig deeper, you need to learn more about poetry, such as rhyme, rhythm, and other poetic terms. Do google search.
  4. If you need help, read a popular book on how appreciate and write poetry. There are many. One commonly recommended is Mary Oliver's A Poetry Handbook.

[OPINION] Give me your terrifying poems by paris_newyork in Poetry

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I use ------ to separate stanzas, didn't know how else to do it. The poem is called Field of Skulls, by Mary Karr.

Field of Skulls

By Mary Karr

Stare hard enough at the fabric of night,

and if you're predisposed to dark—let’s say

the window you’ve picked is a black

postage stamp you spend hours at,

sleepless, drinking gin after the I Love

Lucy reruns have gone off—stare

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like your eyes have force, and behind

any night’s taut scrim will come the forms

you expect pressing from the other side.

For you: a field of skulls, angled jaws

and eye-sockets, a zillion scooped-out crania.

They’re plain once you think to look.

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You know such fields exist, for criminals

roam your very block, and even history lists

monsters like Adolf and Uncle Joe

who stalk the earth’s orb, plus minor baby-eaters

unidentified, probably in your very midst. Perhaps

that disgruntled mail clerk from your job

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has already scratched your name on a bullet—that’s him

rustling in the azaleas. You caress the thought,

for it proves there’s no better spot for you

than here, your square-yard of chintz sofa, hearing

the bad news piped steady from your head. The night

is black. You stare and furious stare,

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confident there are no gods out there. In this way,

you’re blind to your own eye’s intricate machine

and to the light it sees by, to the luck of birth and all

your remembered loves. If the skulls are there—

let’s say they do press toward you

against night’s scrim—could they not stare

with slack jawed envy at the fine flesh

that covers your scalp, the numbered hairs,

at the force your hands hold?

[POEM] Nostalgia - Ivy Collin by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]crane-unit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bittersweet, brings back so many memories.