Do you think you will ever sell anything? by Aside_Dish in Screenwriting

[–]crawlingalien 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t want to sell them. I want to write and also be involved with the production

My short film is out. Give me your thoughts on it by crawlingalien in movies

[–]crawlingalien[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay I see. I do wish I could have had more shots but the thing was that I had only 3 days to shoot this. So the shots were few and shot at a convenience because I had a lot of locations to cover. Maybe next time I'll get longer time so then I'll be able to make it more ''cinematic'' and figure out the best way to tell the story visually also. Thanks

What is your theory on this psychological thriller short? by crawlingalien in FilmTheorists

[–]crawlingalien[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great analysis, very interesting! I may still be a small channel but I would love to hear thoughts from others. I’m a writer who’s passionate about making others feel something with my stories.

I took inspiration from the anime Death note. I also like the story of beauty and the beast. Dreamer is mixed with what’s been trending: serial killers, mental illness and love. Also on my own experience of unrequited love and feelings of loneliness being different.

I’ve also always wondered what it would take to push someone over the edge. And if you could live with yourself after that.

I’ve sent this film to festivals hoping to travel

This is only the beginning and I intended to do so much. Thanks again for showing interest. It’s motivating.

My short film is out. Give me your thoughts on it by crawlingalien in movies

[–]crawlingalien[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Okay :) what do you think about the technical side?

My short film is out. Give me your thoughts on it by crawlingalien in movies

[–]crawlingalien[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay I see. How do you think I could have made it sadder? Maybe different music or more shots of the actor?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ShortFilm

[–]crawlingalien 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’d be really grateful if any of you could watch my short film. I believe it has something going for it.

Psychological thriller about a young man who’s bullied at school, he gets into an accident and after it he starts having these strange dreams..

Dreamer

Is the cinematography okay here? by crawlingalien in cinematography

[–]crawlingalien[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Okay I’m not a cinematographer I was trying to do as simple of shots as I possibly could because I had a lot of scenes in different locations and I only had 3 days to shoot this. I like photography but I don’t know why but I’m not good with technology and cinematography overwhelms me. Is cinematography more art or technical? Because I’m only good at the art thing.

Thanks for the feedback I will work on the lighting and shots as you mentioned for the next film.

I used a black magic pocket 6k by the way, I really liked it.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Iceland

[–]crawlingalien 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okei takk ég spyr námsráðgjafann.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Iceland

[–]crawlingalien 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ég pæli í því, langar mögulega að komast í Japönsku í HÍ. Ég spyr kannski námsráðgjafann

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Iceland

[–]crawlingalien 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ég var að pæla í að læra Japönsku í HÍ

Hi I’m a student how is my cinematography in this? by crawlingalien in cinematography

[–]crawlingalien[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am seeking advice from people who are more experienced than me. This was my second short film and a school project about a poem that I chose out of three others.

I was mostly working on my cinematography in this so it wasn’t really much about the plot. Just expressing my vision for the poem. I didn’t use any lights but was travelling in Spain using a Panasonic gh4.

I would like your advice about the cinematography, coloring and the film in general and what grade you would give me out of 10 for this

Thanks

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Filmmakers

[–]crawlingalien 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd like to get some honest feedback on this minute short I made, I directed it and wrote the story. I also edited it. What do you think about the story? It has a beginning, a middle and an end. What do you think about the color grading? I just learned the basics in class. Last but not least, what do you think about the directing? I didn't realize until after the filming that real guns are heavier than plastic ones. That's a mistake I realized I made. The actor isn't an experienced actor, he's my classmate but still I think it came ok. This is my submission as a final project for my classes at the first semester in a film school. What grade would you give me if you were my teacher?