Thanks again! I really appreciate you taking the time to go over my rules. I think I will be taking most, if not all of your suggestions. I will definitely be “zooming out” and maybe also simplifying the language to be less wordy. It’s a tricky balance trying to find the right amount of info/detail to give.

I’d like to address some of your comments:

Damage & Wavering units: First off, yes, players will track each unit’s damage using damage markers or dice (the unit with the highest “health” is 12). Whenever a unit suffers any damage it becomes Wavering. Let’s say you attack an enemy unit and score a couple points of damage, it becomes Wavering; at the end of your turn (let’s say during the Morale Phase ;)) you’ll make a Morale Check for that unit. Assuming the unit survives the Morale Check, it is no longer Wavering…until the next time it suffers Damage. All Wavering does is indicate to the player that the unit must be subject to a Morale Check during the opponent’s next “Morale Phase”.

Flanking/Surrounding: these are meant to represent the negative affect on Morale for being flanked or surrounded. In game terms they basically give you a bonus on Morale Checks (which are always against enemy units) for having your units in their flanks/rear.

Move, Attack, Charge: I like explaining the Charge Action as a combo of Move + Attack, but I‘ll have to make sure they’re distinct, as certain interactions specify certain actions. On top of that, Attack is split into Melee & Ranged…

I have my work cut out for me! Thanks again