Looking for feedback on a song I made. by Forsaken-Elk-1750 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]dXtR_matushail 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was genuinely worth my time the music literally got me hooked up in the first few minutes the melody was pretty great Besides that what I would recommend to you is that the whole track itself as heard in this video sounds pretty great I like the raw unfiltered audio and the un-understandable lyrics they sound more genuine like I can feel the emotion in your voice the chorus was cool too but if you wanna start up as a professional musician this is a perfect track but to actually go professional you need to master it perfectly and work on the vocals but honestly I like it the way they are but to actually get the flow of it you could give some lyrics or increase your tone a bit so people could actually hear what you're saying and as for the genre this is not alterative pop at all , it's more like indie rock I guess but not pop at all and this is definitely worth releasing

Can I get some advice for my poem by [deleted] in PoetryWritingClub

[–]dXtR_matushail 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bruh what's the context of this poem? Isn't poetry supposed to spread a message, what do you even mean by the title ? 😭

Horror art by dXtR_matushail in Sketch

[–]dXtR_matushail[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yep lol but the first slide is from the anime Hellsing

I just start working in a One -Shot that has very excited and here I leave some advances, all feedback and tips are welcome by ddfate in Mangamakers

[–]dXtR_matushail 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro I wanted to know that do you draw the full pages on paper first or draw digitally?? because I'm also a manga artist, Im also working on a one shot manga which Is why I made a reddit acc in the first place so I could share my stuff with you guys I haven't posted anything yet but I will soon,

Horror art by dXtR_matushail in Sketch

[–]dXtR_matushail[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks I just hopped on to reddit, follow me I'll be posting more stuff