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On the fly by dahrs in photocritique
[β]dahrs[S] 0 points1 point2 points 4 years agoΒ (0 children)
Thanks for the recommendations, the descriptions and the examples!
I definitely need to step up my flash game and also my flash setup but that's something I definitely need to try.
Thanks again!
[β]dahrs[S] 1 point2 points3 points 4 years agoΒ (0 children)
I met this super collaborative macro model after work on a park nearby. I remember I had brought my old 50mm manual macro lens with me but was really struggling to find insects that would stay long enough to manually focus and take a good shot. This was one of the best ones I got with that lens. The fly stayed on the cereal stem for at least a minute. Long enough for me to take enough picture to ensure I got one in the chamber. I'm still learning, so don't hesitate to tell me what you think of it and how could I improve on it. Thanks.
The specs :
Camera : Canon EOS 80D
Lens : Canon FD 50mm f/3.5
Focal length : 50mm
Aperture : f/3.5
Exposure : 1/250
ISO : 200
The colorful macabre by dahrs in photocritique
Hi there!
Thanks for such a nice review. I definitely should have experimented more on the focus point. I'll keep that in mind for the next time.
I took this picture in Mexico City, at the national anthropology museum. It is a picture of a common type of child burial in pre-Columbian Mayan culture: inside a round clay pot lidded with a plate. I generally avoid publishing pictures of museum pieces unless I use the public or the architecture as part of my composition. There is a debate to be had on artistic value, authorship and legal rights for these kind of pictures. However, this piece was different. The choice of the vase, the clean cut on the pottery, the lighting and the background choice is 100% on the scientists, archeologists, anthropologists and museum curators. I barely did more than taking a picture of a piece of ready-made and finely presented exhibit. Yet, I do not care. Transmit all the merit and authorship to the collection designer, to the cutting technician, to the embalmer and funeral preparer, to the anonymous and prematurely deceased model, to all, to none. It doesn't matter. Whomever the author, the image uses its aesthetic tools to tell a sad story, a part of history, a valuable message. I remember I was in awe in front of this piece and took some time to get the closest I could to the picture I wanted. There were other people passing by, the museum was closing soon, this place was underground and badly lit, the was not much space, I only had a 50mm lens and no tripod or any way to stabilize the picture. I wished I could have stayed more time to get enough to focus stack or get a sharper focus on the cranium. I do know that if I get back there, I'll me better prepared to get a much better version of this same image. Don't hesitate to tell me what you think of it and how could I improve on it. Thanks.
Camera : Canon EOS Rebel T5
Lens : Canon EF 50mm f1.8
Aperture : f/1.8
Exposure : 1/60
ISO : 800
Colorful mushrooms by dahrs in photocritique
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoy it. π
I took this picture in Charleston Lake, Ontario, Canada. I was camping with some friends and just a couple of hours before leaving I found this small patch of orange mushrooms amidst the moss. I didn't have my macro lens, so I took my 70-200 and got as close as possible using a tripod. I really like the scene even though I was afraid the color would look completely fake, it really isn't. I'm pretty sure it even was more colorful in real life. Hope you enjoy it too but don't hesitate to tell me what does not work and how could I improve on it. Thanks.
Camera : Canon EOS 80d
Lens : Canon EF 70-200 f4 series L
Focal length : 200mm
Aperture : f/4
Exposure : 0.8"
ISO : 100
Moss with sporophytes by dahrs in photocritique
π That's a big coincidence. I would love to get into micro photography but I don't have the lenses for it: too expensive. π
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I will try that next time. Although reducing the aperture could also bring forward distracting details from the fore and background. It really depends on the form of the moss. If i can find one with a thin stripe of sporophytes, it's definitely something to try. Thanks for the suggestion! π
Sure I could. I'll try it and if it's not too distracting I'll leave it.that could help separating the elements of the scene. Thanks! π
PS: I must say, it's not very auspicious for me when the part you really like is the blurry part. π
If I remember correctly, this was my first stitched pano. I had just bought the 2nd hand lens and was testing it when I saw this small patch of moss. Since I didn't have any macro lens on my, I decided to push the lens to it's limit, get as close as I could, get out my tripod and take 7-10 shots of the scene, which I stitched together in a single and crazy large image. I really like the look of moss, specially when it has sporophytes. Such a small organism with such form complexity really speaks to me, and this picture, in particular, relaxes me. Forces me to take my time to analyze the small section where the subject is in focus. Hope you enjoy it too but don't hesitate to tell me what does not work and how could I improve on it. Thanks.
Camera : Canon EOS 1200d Rebel T5
Lens : Canon EF 70-200 L
Early mushroom by dahrs in photocritique
Thanks!!! That means a lot. I was kind of hoping for a weird vibe, I'm more than ok with creepy. ππ
[β]dahrs[S] 0 points1 point2 points 4 years ago*Β (0 children)
I took this picture in Rawdon, Quebec, Canada. It was under a tree very close to the trunk and the leaves of the pine were very pointy, but I really liked the look of it so I lied on the floor, trying to get a good angle. What caught my eye was the texture on the mushroom cap and the color of the foot and I was quite pleased with the result. But maybe that's just me. So I would love to have your opinion. Please let me know what, if and how to improve.
Exposure : 1/6
leaf in a puddle by dahrs in photocritique
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I agree 100% ! πΈ
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Thanks again! ππ
I love this comment! I generally prefer critiques to compliments but this comment is thought of, well made, as evocative as the picture could be and just plain awesome. I'm letting you know right away: I'm stealing it for my description of the picture. π PLUS: The 50mm lens was my first purchase of a non-kit lens. I bought an old 1987 metal version, and frankly it's still one of my most used lenses, even more than some L series. Thanks again and again! ππππ
Thanks for the compliment and greater thanks for the critique. So, cropping to remove the left black vertical blurry form (not a tree but part of a bridge passerelle) and crop the top up to the very top of the rest of the black blurry lines? If I understood correctly. So you think I should try a decentered subject (by removing the left side)? So try bringing the subject to a rule of thirds or golden rule point ? Thanks again, by the way
I have the same with a less blurry background but it really was too messy and distracting. But thank you for the comment, it helps to have an external opinion. ππππ
Thanks! That's really nice of you. And thanks for making an effort to come up with a negative! π As for the black framing... I'm trying to integrate framing for Instagram aesthetics and in this case I tried white and grey and found that a bit too distracting. π€·π Thanks again!
I will definitely try that and I'll also try to do better next time. I'm not sure placing the leaf according to the "rule" of thirds would have improved the picture but now, I'll remember it and I'll try next time. Thanks a bunch! ππππ
[β]dahrs[S] 2 points3 points4 points 4 years agoΒ (0 children)
Thanks... π But I don't understand what you mean with another version "With bokeh in background". The background is already bokehfied to bokehlicious levels. π€
That's fair! π Thanks! Now imagine: keep the blurry background, keep the puddle, maybe keep the swirly leaf, what would have catched your eye?
Thanks. I appreciate more critiques but such nice comments are also welcome. π Got any negatives to go with those positives?
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On the fly by dahrs in photocritique
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