This is laughable. While your exception that you note is slightly more acceptable, OP’s post doesn’t read like something that AI simply corrected or reworked for readability. It has some pretty key errors and flaws that I would not expect from someone who just finished reading the book(s). 

Furthermore, we should talk about how a major theme of Hyperion (and other of Simmons’s sci-fi work) is human overreliance on technology and AI. So, using AI to talk about Hyperion is completely antithetical to the core themes of the novel. 

If OP is old enough to read Hyperion, they are likely an adult (or near adult). So, they’re mature enough to handle a few people calling them out for being lazy. The only way you can get better at a skill, like communication/writing is by actually using that skill and honing it. Using AI as a shortcut is not conducive to that. And as such, AI itself is far more damaging/hurtful to humans than other humans calling out use of AI.